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Jack

Jan. 4, 2021

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Translation Practice

I finally received cat food. I thought about what cat food I should buy when I was in the supermarket. Maybe it was still tuna like the last time I bought it. At the time, a wonderful scene showed up in front of me: a whole shelf of cat food. I bought one pack excitedly, and went straight home to feed the cats. The two cats immediately eat out the whole food. Afterwards, I heard someone knocking on the door; My express arrived-the cat food l bought from Jingdong. I sighed-there is either a lack of cat food or too much cat food. However, there is enough cat food; The cats have food to eat. Yesterday, my neighbor returned. When I slept, she quietly opened my door and let the cats come back to her room. I wasn’t aware of this situation then, so I was nervous when I got up this morning and didn’t find the cats. Did I forget to shut the door when the cats ran away? I finally learned that my neighbor had already returned and it was earlier than I expected.

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Translation Practice

I finally received cat food.

I thought about whatich cat food I should buy when I was ingoing to be at the supermarket.

Maybe it was still tunaould be tuna again, like the last time I bought it.

At the time, a wonderful scene showed up in front of me: a whole shelf of cat food.

I bought one pack excitedly, and went straight home to feed the cats.

The two cats immediately eate out the whole bowl of food.

Afterwards, I heard someone knocking on the door;. My express order had arrived-; the cat food l had bought from Jingdong.

I sighed-: there is always either a lack of cat food or too much cat food.

However, now, there is enough cat food;. The cats have food to eat.

Yesterday, my neighbor returned.

When Iile I was sleepting, she quietly opened my door and let the cats come back to her room.

I wasn’t aware of this situation then, so I was nervous when I got up this morning and didn’t find the cats.

DiHad I forgetotten to shut the door whenand the cats ran away?

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Pretty good, but be careful with the tenses.

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Jack

Jan. 4, 2021

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Thank you very much, but tenses is very difficult for me. I don’t even know how to use it.

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MikaSwedish

Jan. 4, 2021

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I know, tenses are difficult :) Here is an image which describes when and how to use the tenses: https://i.pinimg.com/originals/64/f6/95/64f695ba1d1669d0d1229e49dd54b461.jpg

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Jack

Jan. 4, 2021

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Thank you for sending me the image.

Translation Practice


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I finally received cat food.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I thought about what cat food I should buy when I was in the supermarket.


I thought about whatich cat food I should buy when I was ingoing to be at the supermarket.

Maybe it was still tuna like the last time I bought it.


Maybe it was still tunaould be tuna again, like the last time I bought it.

At the time, a wonderful scene showed up in front of me: a whole shelf of cat food.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I bought one pack excitedly, and went straight home to feed the cats.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The two cats immediately eat out the whole food.


The two cats immediately eate out the whole bowl of food.

Afterwards, I heard someone knocking on the door; My express arrived-the cat food l bought from Jingdong.


Afterwards, I heard someone knocking on the door;. My express order had arrived-; the cat food l had bought from Jingdong.

I sighed-there is either a lack of cat food or too much cat food.


I sighed-: there is always either a lack of cat food or too much cat food.

However, there is enough cat food; The cats have food to eat.


However, now, there is enough cat food;. The cats have food to eat.

Yesterday, my neighbor returned.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

When I slept, she quietly opened my door and let the cats come back to her room.


When Iile I was sleepting, she quietly opened my door and let the cats come back to her room.

I wasn’t aware of this situation then, so I was nervous when I got up this morning and didn’t find the cats.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Did I forget to shut the door when the cats ran away?


DiHad I forgetotten to shut the door whenand the cats ran away?

I finally learned that my neighbor had already returned and it was earlier than I expected.


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