April 7, 2023
Translation Practice
She might be afraid that my clogs would hurt the lichen in her yard.
She kept her door closed although I knocked it for a long time.
The spring scenery full of her yard couldn’t be locked.
A red apricot flower has already been out of the wall.
应怜屐齿印苍苔，
小扣柴扉久不开。
春色满园关不住，
一枝红杏出墙来。
（游园不值
宋·叶绍翁）
Translation Practice
She might bewas afraid (that) my clogs would hurt the lichen in her yard.
She kept her door closed although I knocked it for a long time.
The spring scenery out in full ofin her yard couldn’t be lockstopped.
I'm not sure what you are trying to say here. Is this what you meant?
A red apricot flower has already been out ofloomed on the wall.
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Great writing! :)
April 9, 2023
The spring scenery out in full ofin her yard couldn’t be lockstopped.
Although she didn’t open her door, she couldn’t keep the scenery in her yard from being seen by people outside her yard and an apricot tree inside her yard had already bloomed with some flowers reaching out of her yard.
“Out in full?” Is it an adjective here?
April 9, 2023
Thank you very much!
April 9, 2023
Although she didn’t open her door, she couldn’t keep the scenery in her yard from being seen by people outside her yard and an apricot tree inside her yard had already bloomed with some flowers reaching out of her yard. “Out in full?” Is it an adjective here?
That makes more sense now!
In a way, "out in full" could be switched for "bloomed" - The spring scenery bloomed out of her yard
April 9, 2023
Thank you very much.
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