Jan. 9, 2021
Translation Practice
I want to write about my hobbies.
[hobby one. Listen to music]
I like various styles of music. Especially rock music and metal music. Some time ago, I liked Mongolia music. Recently, my favorite music is Chinese popular music. Zhoushen is a splendid singer. Tang Hanxiao is a talented singer-songwriter. There are also many excellent singers. For example, A Yunga, Zheng Yunlong and so on. I especially focus on the Chinese entertainment circle. My favorite musicians: China, Zhoushen(I am a raw rice), Tang Hanxiao, Mao Buyi, Summer. Mongolia: THE HU, Khusugtun etc.
Translation Practice
I want to write about my hobbies.
[hobby one.
Listen to music]
I like various styles of music.
E, especially rock music and metal music.
This is not a complete sentence, so I would have put it as a continuation of the last phrase (unless you are trying to be poetic): "I like various styles of music, especially rock and metal." It is also more natural to just say "rock and metal" once your reader already knows you are talking abut music.
Some time ago, I liked Mongolia music.
Recently, my favorite music is Chinese popular music.
Zhoushen is a splendid singer.
Tang Hanxiao is a talented singer-songwriter.
There are also many excellent singers.
For example, A Yunga, Zheng Yunlong and so on.
Like the other correction, this is also not a complete sentence, so it would be more correct to add it to the last sentence. Alternatively, you could add a verb like: "For example, A Yunga and Zheng Yunlong are excellent singers."
I especially focus on the Chinese entertainment circle.
My favorite musicians: are China, Zhoushen(I am a raw rice), Tang Hanxiao, Mao Buyi, Summer.
Mongolia: THE HU, Khusugtun etc.
Maybe this was supposed to be with the last sentence?
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Jan. 10, 2021
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Especially rock music and metal music.
This is not a complete sentence, so I would have put it as a continuation of the last phrase (unless you are trying to be poetic): "I like various styles of music, especially rock and metal." It is also more natural to just say "rock and metal" once your reader already knows you are talking abut music. |
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I want to write about my hobbies. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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[hobby one. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Listen to music] This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Some time ago, I liked Mongolia music. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Recently, my favorite music is Chinese popular music. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Zhoushen is a splendid singer. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Tang Hanxiao is a talented singer-songwriter. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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There are also many excellent singers. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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For example, A Yunga, Zheng Yunlong and so on. For example, A Yunga, Zheng Yunlong and so on. Like the other correction, this is also not a complete sentence, so it would be more correct to add it to the last sentence. Alternatively, you could add a verb like: "For example, A Yunga and Zheng Yunlong are excellent singers." |
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I especially focus on the Chinese entertainment circle. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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My favorite musicians: China, Zhoushen(I am a raw rice), Tang Hanxiao, Mao Buyi, Summer. My favorite musicians |
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Mongolia: THE HU, Khusugtun etc. Mongolia: THE HU, Khusugtun etc. Maybe this was supposed to be with the last sentence? |
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