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Jan. 8, 2021

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Recently I have been staying home because of the terrible COVID-19 situation in Italy. I usually get up at 8 to 9am, and I don't necessarily eat breakfast. The key is to see if I am hungry, but generally I don’t eat. I am a university student. Because of the COVID-19 pandemic, our lessons have changed to online lessons, so if I have a lesson one day, I will open my computer to have it. If there are no lessons one day, I will open YouTube to learn Chinese or Japanese. Afterwards, I will play on my computer all day long and review some language learning cards. I usually watch videos until 10 or 11pm and then I am sleepy, so I usually go to bed during this period of time. Before I go to bed, I like watching some news on my phone, especially the news about the current COVID-19 situations.

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Recently I have been staying home because of the terrible COVID-19 situation in Italy.

I usually get up atbetween 8 to 9am, and I don't necessarily eat breakfast.

The key is toI see if I am hungry, but generally I don’t eat.

What you wrote is correct, but "key" doesn't fit in well.

I am a university student.

Because of the COVID-19 pandemic, our lessons have changed to online lessons, so if I have a lesson on some day, I will openneed to boot up my computer to have it.

"open my computer" would work if the computer is a laptop (and it requires physically opening)

I'm not sure but I think "one day" is incorrect here: the "one" in "one day" implies a one-off event. ["One day, my sister walked in on me while I was singing." Or "One day, I'll be old enough to drink alcohol."] But it's likely that a student will take classes on multiple days.

If there are no lessons on some day, I will open YouTube toand learn Chinese or Japanese.

Afterwards, I will play on my computer all day long and review some language learning cards.

I usually watch videos until 10 or 11pm and then I ambecome sleepy, so I usually go to bed during this period ofat this time.

Before I go to bed, I like watching some news on my phone, especially the news about the current COVID-19 situations.

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Jack

Jan. 8, 2021

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Thank you very much.

Translation Practice


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Recently I have been staying home because of the terrible COVID-19 situation in Italy.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I usually get up at 8 to 9am, and I don't necessarily eat breakfast.


I usually get up atbetween 8 to 9am, and I don't necessarily eat breakfast.

The key is to see if I am hungry, but generally I don’t eat.


The key is toI see if I am hungry, but generally I don’t eat.

What you wrote is correct, but "key" doesn't fit in well.

I am a university student.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Because of the COVID-19 pandemic, our lessons have changed to online lessons, so if I have a lesson one day, I will open my computer to have it.


Because of the COVID-19 pandemic, our lessons have changed to online lessons, so if I have a lesson on some day, I will openneed to boot up my computer to have it.

"open my computer" would work if the computer is a laptop (and it requires physically opening) I'm not sure but I think "one day" is incorrect here: the "one" in "one day" implies a one-off event. ["One day, my sister walked in on me while I was singing." Or "One day, I'll be old enough to drink alcohol."] But it's likely that a student will take classes on multiple days.

If there are no lessons one day, I will open YouTube to learn Chinese or Japanese.


If there are no lessons on some day, I will open YouTube toand learn Chinese or Japanese.

Afterwards, I will play on my computer all day long and review some language learning cards.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I usually watch videos until 10 or 11pm and then I am sleepy, so I usually go to bed during this period of time.


I usually watch videos until 10 or 11pm and then I ambecome sleepy, so I usually go to bed during this period ofat this time.

Before I go to bed, I like watching some news on my phone, especially the news about the current COVID-19 situations.


Before I go to bed, I like watching some news on my phone, especially the news about the current COVID-19 situations.

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