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Jack

Jan. 17, 2021

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According to the Vietnamese news website YAN reported on January 14th, a 14-year-old Indian astrology “prodigy" recently released a major prediction: I am afraid there will be a bigger disaster in February, 2021.

The boy’s name is Anand, and a special sign is painted in the middle of his eyebrows. As early as August, 2019, Anand claimed that through astrology, it was predicted that human beings would encounter major disasters in November. This disaster will reach its peak in March and April, 2020.

At the end of 2019 and the beginning of 2020, the COVID-19 epidemic broke out quietly. Some people think that Anand’s prediction is too accurate, and some people even began to worship Anand as a deity. Since then, Anand has become famous. In July last year, he predicted that there would be problems with the vaccine in COVID-19.

In November last year, Anand posted a video on his social account, saying that from November 20 to 29, Jupiter will enter Capricorn to combine with Saturn, which means there will be a crisis. From December 19 to 29, Saturn will combine with Jupiter again, which is really a sign of “great evil”.

Coincidentally, at the end of December last year, the British health department reported to WHO that it had discovered the mutated SARS-CoV-2 and admitted that the virus was out of control within the country. Therefore, many people who believe in Anand believe that he is really a “child prodigy”.

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According to tThe Vietnamese news website YAN reported on January 14th, that a 14-year-old Indian astrology “prodigy" had recently releasedmade a major prediction: "I am afraid there will be a bigger disaster in February, 2021".

"According to X" or "X reported....", but not both.

The prediction is a direct quote, so it must be in quotation marks. An indirect quotation would not change subject. That would be "... had made a major prediction: there would be a bigger disaster in February 2021".

The boy’s name is Anand, and a special sign is painted in the middle of his eyebrows.

As early as August, 2019, Anand claimed that through astrology, it was predicted that human beings would encounter major disasters in November.

Thisese disasters willould reach itstheir peak in March and April, 2020.

In the previous sentence, you described many disaster, not only one.

At the end of 2019 and the beginning of 2020, the COVID-19 epidemic broke out quietly.

Some people think that Anand’s prediction is too accurate, and some people even began to worship Anand as a deity.

Since then, Anand has become famous.

In July last year, he predicted that there would be problems with the vaccine infor COVID-19.

Prepositions are arbitrary. 😉

In November last year, Anand posted a video on his social account, saying that from November 20 to 29, Jupiter will enter Capricorn to combine with Saturn, which means there will be a crisis.

From December 19 to 29, Saturn will combine with Jupiter again, which is really a sign of “great evil”.

Coincidentally, at the end of December last year, the British health department reported to WHO that it had discovered the mutated SARS-CoV-2 and admitted that the virus was out of control within the country.

Therefore, many people who believe in Anand believe that he is really a “child prodigy”.

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Jack

Jan. 19, 2021

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Thank you very much.

According to the Vietnamese news website, YAN, which reported that on January 14th, a 14-year-old Indian astrology “prodigy" recently released a major prediction: "I am afraid there will be a bigger disaster in February, 2021."

When you are referring to a website, you can simply say "site", and people will understand. Also, when you are quoting someone, you need to use the quotation marks, otherwise, you can simply change the pronoun to he or she, depending on the prodigy's gender.

The boy’s name is Anand, and he has a special sign isymbol painted in the middle ofbetween his eyebrows.

As early as August, 2019, Anand claimhad already predicted that through astrology, it was predicted that human beings would be encountering major disasters in November.

It would be better if you could include the year to be consistent.

This disaster willould reach its peak in March and April, 2020.

I changed the verb to "would" because it was a prediction, and not a certainty.

AtSure enough, by the end of 2019 and the beginning of 2020, the COVID-19 epidemic broke outhad erupted quietly.

Some pPeople thinkought that Anand’s prediction iwas too accurate, and some peopl. In fact, some even began to worship Anandhim as a deity.

Since thehis prediction, Anand has become famous.

In July last year, he2020, he once again predicted that there would be problems with the vaccine in COVID-19 vaccine.

IThen in November last year2020, Anand posted a video on his social account, sayline, stating that from November 20th to 29the 29th, Jupiter will enter Capricorn to combine with Saturn, which means there will be a crisis.

I'm not sure what you mean by Jupiter will "enter" Capricorn? and also how do planets combine with other planets? Do you mean to say that their paths will cross, or that we will see an eclipse?

From December 19th to the 29th, Saturn will once again combine with Jupiter again, which is really arepresents the sign of “great evil”.

Do you mean the conjunction between Saturn and Jupiter that occurred in December? (what some people call the Christmas star?). Maybe you could explain it like this: In December 2020, Saturn and Jupiter came very close together as if they were traveling in a single lane. This phenomenon is viewed by some as a sign of "great evil".

Coincidentally, at the end of December last yearsame time, the British hHealth dDepartment reported to WHO that it had discovered the mutated SARS-CoV-2 and admittethe SARS-CoV-2 had mutated and that the viruscountry was out of control within the country.

Therefore, many people who believed in Anand believewere able to affirm that he is really a “child prodigy”.

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Jack

Jan. 17, 2021

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The original Chinese passage said 木星与土星结合,so I translated it as “Saturn would combine with Jupiter”. To be honest, I don’t know about the content of the passage at all. Thank you very much.

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nschafer888

Jan. 18, 2021

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I think 结合 represents the word "conjunction" in terms of celestial movements. Think of a race track. Each runner has his/her own lane, and once in awhile, one runner will come extremely close to another, so from a certain angle, they almost look like they are one runner.

Translation Practice

According to what the Vietnamese news website YAN reported on January 14th, a 14-year-old Indian astrology “prodigy" recently released a major prediction: "I am afraid there will be a bigger disaster in February, 2021."

The boy’s name is Anand, and a special sign is painted in the middle ofbetween his eyebrows.

As early as August, 2019, Anand claimed that through astrology, it was predicted that human beings would encounter major disasters in November.

This disaster willould reach its peak in March and April, 2020.

At the end of 2019 and the beginning of 2020, the COVID-19 epidemic broke out quietly.

Some people thinkought that Anand’s prediction is towas so accurate, and some people that they even began to worship Anand as a deity.

Since then, Anand has become famous.

In July last year, he predicted that there would be problems with the vaccine in COVID-19.

In November last year, Anand posted a video on his social media account, saying that from November 20 to 29, Jupiter willould enter Capricorn to combine with Saturn, which meanst there willould be a crisis.

From December 19 to 29, Saturn willould combine with Jupiter again, which iswould really be a sign of “great evil”.

Coincidentally, at the end of December last year, the British health department reported to the WHO that it had discovered the mutated SARS-CoV-2 and admitted that the virus was out of control within the country.

Therefore, many people who believe in Anand believe that he is really a “child prodigy”.

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Jack

Jan. 17, 2021

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Thank you very much.

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According to the Vietnamese news website YAN reported on January 14th, a 14-year-old Indian astrology “prodigy" recently released a major prediction: I am afraid there will be a bigger disaster in February, 2021.


According to what the Vietnamese news website YAN reported on January 14th, a 14-year-old Indian astrology “prodigy" recently released a major prediction: "I am afraid there will be a bigger disaster in February, 2021."

According to the Vietnamese news website, YAN, which reported that on January 14th, a 14-year-old Indian astrology “prodigy" recently released a major prediction: "I am afraid there will be a bigger disaster in February, 2021."

When you are referring to a website, you can simply say "site", and people will understand. Also, when you are quoting someone, you need to use the quotation marks, otherwise, you can simply change the pronoun to he or she, depending on the prodigy's gender.

According to tThe Vietnamese news website YAN reported on January 14th, that a 14-year-old Indian astrology “prodigy" had recently releasedmade a major prediction: "I am afraid there will be a bigger disaster in February, 2021".

"According to X" or "X reported....", but not both. The prediction is a direct quote, so it must be in quotation marks. An indirect quotation would not change subject. That would be "... had made a major prediction: there would be a bigger disaster in February 2021".

The boy’s name is Anand, and a special sign is painted in the middle of his eyebrows.


The boy’s name is Anand, and a special sign is painted in the middle ofbetween his eyebrows.

The boy’s name is Anand, and he has a special sign isymbol painted in the middle ofbetween his eyebrows.

The boy’s name is Anand, and a special sign is painted in the middle of his eyebrows.

As early as August, 2019, Anand claimed that through astrology, it was predicted that human beings would encounter major disasters in November.


As early as August, 2019, Anand claimed that through astrology, it was predicted that human beings would encounter major disasters in November.

As early as August, 2019, Anand claimhad already predicted that through astrology, it was predicted that human beings would be encountering major disasters in November.

It would be better if you could include the year to be consistent.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This disaster will reach its peak in March and April, 2020.


This disaster willould reach its peak in March and April, 2020.

This disaster willould reach its peak in March and April, 2020.

I changed the verb to "would" because it was a prediction, and not a certainty.

Thisese disasters willould reach itstheir peak in March and April, 2020.

In the previous sentence, you described many disaster, not only one.

At the end of 2019 and the beginning of 2020, the COVID-19 epidemic broke out quietly.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

AtSure enough, by the end of 2019 and the beginning of 2020, the COVID-19 epidemic broke outhad erupted quietly.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Some people think that Anand’s prediction is too accurate, and some people even began to worship Anand as a deity.


Some people thinkought that Anand’s prediction is towas so accurate, and some people that they even began to worship Anand as a deity.

Some pPeople thinkought that Anand’s prediction iwas too accurate, and some peopl. In fact, some even began to worship Anandhim as a deity.

Some people think that Anand’s prediction is too accurate, and some people even began to worship Anand as a deity.

Since then, Anand has become famous.


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Since thehis prediction, Anand has become famous.

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In July last year, he predicted that there would be problems with the vaccine in COVID-19.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

In July last year, he2020, he once again predicted that there would be problems with the vaccine in COVID-19 vaccine.

In July last year, he predicted that there would be problems with the vaccine infor COVID-19.

Prepositions are arbitrary. 😉

In November last year, Anand posted a video on his social account, saying that from November 20 to 29, Jupiter will enter Capricorn to combine with Saturn, which means there will be a crisis.


In November last year, Anand posted a video on his social media account, saying that from November 20 to 29, Jupiter willould enter Capricorn to combine with Saturn, which meanst there willould be a crisis.

IThen in November last year2020, Anand posted a video on his social account, sayline, stating that from November 20th to 29the 29th, Jupiter will enter Capricorn to combine with Saturn, which means there will be a crisis.

I'm not sure what you mean by Jupiter will "enter" Capricorn? and also how do planets combine with other planets? Do you mean to say that their paths will cross, or that we will see an eclipse?

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

From December 19 to 29, Saturn will combine with Jupiter again, which is really a sign of “great evil”.


From December 19 to 29, Saturn willould combine with Jupiter again, which iswould really be a sign of “great evil”.

From December 19th to the 29th, Saturn will once again combine with Jupiter again, which is really arepresents the sign of “great evil”.

Do you mean the conjunction between Saturn and Jupiter that occurred in December? (what some people call the Christmas star?). Maybe you could explain it like this: In December 2020, Saturn and Jupiter came very close together as if they were traveling in a single lane. This phenomenon is viewed by some as a sign of "great evil".

From December 19 to 29, Saturn will combine with Jupiter again, which is really a sign of “great evil”.

Coincidentally, at the end of December last year, the British health department reported to WHO that it had discovered the mutated SARS-CoV-2 and admitted that the virus was out of control within the country.


Coincidentally, at the end of December last year, the British health department reported to the WHO that it had discovered the mutated SARS-CoV-2 and admitted that the virus was out of control within the country.

Coincidentally, at the end of December last yearsame time, the British hHealth dDepartment reported to WHO that it had discovered the mutated SARS-CoV-2 and admittethe SARS-CoV-2 had mutated and that the viruscountry was out of control within the country.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Therefore, many people who believe in Anand believe that he is really a “child prodigy”.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Therefore, many people who believed in Anand believewere able to affirm that he is really a “child prodigy”.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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