Feb. 3, 2021
Translation Practice
In July 1965, Yang Chunqing, the cook of Wuhan Donghu Hotel, was resting. Suddenly, Chareman Mao came to him, smiled and asked: "Master Yang, I want to give you something. Do you want it?"
When the master head of this, he immediately was silly. Chairman Mao personally came to give himself a gift? This made Master Yang flattered, and he reacted, and felt that he couldn't accept it. Master Yang said hesitantly: "Chairman ... How can I... I can't accept it."
Seeing that Master Yang was very at a loss, Chairman Mao said "Master Yang, don't be nervous, I really like the bream you cooked."
Then chairman Mao took out a banner from behind and said: "This is a poem, which I wrote after I ate the bream you made, and you have more than half of the credit."
That day, after Chairman Mao visited the Yangtze River, while eating at noon, Master Yang cooked steamed bream for him. Chairman Mao ate very happily, especially after he just finished swimming in the Yangtze River. He ate such delicious fish. Chairman Mao immediately got inspiration and wrote the poem directly.
Master Yang learned that it was not a valuable item. It was a poem written by Chairman Mao, so he smiled and took the banner over, and opened it slowly. It is the famous poem "Shui Diao Ge Tou Swim", and it was the original draft. This banner is well preserved by Yang Chunqing. This poem also made Wuchang fish famous.
Yang Chunqing not only cooked Wuchang fish for Chairman Mao, but also cooked many dishes. Once he cooked "Furong chicken slices" for Chairman Mao, but this time Chairman Mao didn't eat a bit. He said: "The name of this dish is too bad to hear, it makes me lose my appetite. I don't eat it, even if the future economy is improved, I prefer eating some braised pork."
This is Chairman Mao. He gave his poem to an ordinary chef, which is his respect for him. Chairman Mao is such a person, (没有一点主席架子, sorry, I don’t know how to translate it into English) he has never been special, he has always been diligent and thrifty. Chairman Mao gave his whole life to the country and people, and we should always remember him.
In July 1965, Yang Chunqing, the cook of Wuhan Donghu Hotel, was resting.
Suddenly, Chaireman Mao came to him, smiled and asked:said, "Master Yang, I want to give you something.
we use "ask" directly before the question. i.e. 'Chairman Mao came to him, smiled and asked, "Do you want it?"'
Do you want it?
When the master heard of this, he immediately was sillgiddy.
silly is more along the lines of "stupid" but in a comical/non important way
Chairman Mao personally came to give himself a gift?
This made Master Yang was flattered, and he reacted, andbut felt that he couldn't accept it.
Master Yang said hesitantly:, "Chairman ... How can I...
Quotes are preceded by commas, not colons
I can't accept it.
Seeing that Master Yang was very much at a loss, Chairman Mao said, "Master Yang, don't be nervous, I really like the bream you cooked.
Then chairman Mao took out a bannpiece of paper from behind and said:, "This is a poem, which I wrote after I ate the bream you made, and you have more than half of the credit.
you mean "paper", right?
That day, after Chairman Mao visited the Yangtze River, while eating at noon, Master Yang cooked steamed bream for him.
Chairman Mao ate very happily, especially after hes he had just finished swimming in the Yangtze River.
Chairman Mao immediately gotwas inspirationed and wrote the poem directimmediately.
Master Yang learned that it was not a valuable item.
It was a poem written by Chairman Mao, so he smiled and took the banner ovpiece of paper, and opened it slowly.
It is the famous poem "Shui Diao Ge Tou Swim", and it was the original draft.
This bannpaper is well preserved by Yang Chunqing.
This poem also made Wuchang fish famous.
Yang Chunqing not only cooked Wuchang fish for Chairman Mao, but also cooked manymany other dishes.
Once he cooked "Furong chicken slices" for Chairman Mao, but this time Chairman Mao didn't eat a bite.
He said:, "The name of this dish is too bad to hear, isounds bad. It makes me lose my appetite.
I dwon't eat it, even if the future economy is improveds, I prefer eating some braised pork.
This is Chairman Mao.
He gave his poem to an ordinary chef, which ishowed his respect for him.
Chairman Mao is such a person, (没有一点主席架子, sorry, I don’t know how to translate it into English) he has never beendown-to-earth person; He never thought himself special, and he hwas always been diligent and thrifty.
Chairman Mao gave his whole life to the country and people, and we should always remember him.
Feedback
Really well done. I've noticed you've written quite a few long entries - just a quick tip, long entries don't really get corrected. I know you didn't write a book, but if it requires a roll of the mouse wheel, people generally don't want to correct it because it takes so long. I'm going to try correct your other journals, but it might take some time :)
Feb. 4, 2021
Thank you for your corrections and kind tips. These entries are all translated. The original articles are way long, although I choose them as short as possible. In the following journals, I will try to take a few passages from a long article to translate.
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In July 1965, Yang Chunqing, the cook of Wuhan Donghu Hotel, was resting. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Suddenly, Chareman Mao came to him, smiled and asked: "Master Yang, I want to give you something. Suddenly, Chair we use "ask" directly before the question. i.e. 'Chairman Mao came to him, smiled and asked, "Do you want it?"' |
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Do you want it? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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When the master head of this, he immediately was silly. When the master heard silly is more along the lines of "stupid" but in a comical/non important way |
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Chairman Mao personally came to give himself a gift? Chairman Mao personally came to give him |
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This made Master Yang flattered, and he reacted, and felt that he couldn't accept it.
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Master Yang said hesitantly: "Chairman ... How can I... Master Yang said hesitantly Quotes are preceded by commas, not colons |
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I can't accept it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Seeing that Master Yang was very at a loss, Chairman Mao said "Master Yang, don't be nervous, I really like the bream you cooked. Seeing that Master Yang was very much at a loss, Chairman Mao said, "Master Yang, don't be nervous, I really like the bream you cooked. |
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Then chairman Mao took out a banner from behind and said: "This is a poem, which I wrote after I ate the bream you made, and you have more than half of the credit. Then chairman Mao took out a you mean "paper", right? |
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That day, after Chairman Mao visited the Yangtze River, while eating at noon, Master Yang cooked steamed bream for him. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Chairman Mao ate very happily, especially after he just finished swimming in the Yangtze River. Chairman Mao ate very happily, especially a |
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He ate such delicious fish. |
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Chairman Mao immediately got inspiration and wrote the poem directly. Chairman Mao |
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Master Yang learned that it was not a valuable item. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It was a poem written by Chairman Mao, so he smiled and took the banner over, and opened it slowly. It was a poem written by Chairman Mao, so he smiled and took the |
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It is the famous poem "Shui Diao Ge Tou Swim", and it was the original draft. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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This banner is well preserved by Yang Chunqing. This |
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This poem also made Wuchang fish famous. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Yang Chunqing not only cooked Wuchang fish for Chairman Mao, but also cooked many dishes. Yang Chunqing not only cooked Wuchang fish for Chairman Mao, but also |
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Once he cooked "Furong chicken slices" for Chairman Mao, but this time Chairman Mao didn't eat a bit. Once he cooked "Furong chicken slices" for Chairman Mao, but this time Chairman Mao didn't eat a bite. |
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He said: "The name of this dish is too bad to hear, it makes me lose my appetite. He said |
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I don't eat it, even if the future economy is improved, I prefer eating some braised pork. I |
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" |
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This is Chairman Mao. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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He gave his poem to an ordinary chef, which is his respect for him. He gave his poem to an ordinary chef, which |
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Chairman Mao is such a person, (没有一点主席架子, sorry, I don’t know how to translate it into English) he has never been special, he has always been diligent and thrifty. Chairman Mao is such a |
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Chairman Mao gave his whole life to the country and people, and we should always remember him. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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