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Jan. 5, 2021

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My family and I went to Hawaii this winter vacation and we lived in Hawaii for a week. There are very few tourists in Hawaii because of the COVID. We have to do the COVID-19 test when we fly to Hawaii before. Our vacation have a lot of fun. I like snorkeling the most because in the Hawaii ocean, fish are beautiful and various.

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My family and I went to Hawaii this winter vacation and we lived in Hawaiistayed for a week.

Don't need to repeat "in Hawaii"---it's clear from context.

There are very few tourists in Hawaii because of the COVID pandemic.

We haved to do thea COVID-19 test when we fly ew into Hawaii before.

Our vacationWe haved a lot of fun on our vacation.

I particularly like snorkeling the most because in the Hawaiian ocean, fish are beautiful and variousthere are various kinds of beautiful fish.

"the most" is correct, but children talk like this.

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Jack

Jan. 5, 2021

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Thank you very much.

Translation Practice

My family and I went to Hawaii this winter vacation and we livstayed in Hawaii for a week.

There are very few tourists in Hawaii because of the COVID.

We have to do thea COVID-19 test when we flyew to Hawaii before.

Our vacationWe haved a lot of fun on our vacation.

I like snorkeling the most because in the Hawaiin ocean, the fish are beautiful and various.

Translation Practice


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My family and I went to Hawaii this winter vacation and we lived in Hawaii for a week.


My family and I went to Hawaii this winter vacation and we livstayed in Hawaii for a week.

My family and I went to Hawaii this winter vacation and we lived in Hawaiistayed for a week.

Don't need to repeat "in Hawaii"---it's clear from context.

There are very few tourists in Hawaii because of the COVID.


There are very few tourists in Hawaii because of the COVID.

There are very few tourists in Hawaii because of the COVID pandemic.

We have to do the COVID-19 test when we fly to Hawaii before.


We have to do thea COVID-19 test when we flyew to Hawaii before.

We haved to do thea COVID-19 test when we fly ew into Hawaii before.

Our vacation have a lot of fun.


Our vacationWe haved a lot of fun on our vacation.

Our vacationWe haved a lot of fun on our vacation.

I like snorkeling the most because in the Hawaii ocean, fish are beautiful and various.


I like snorkeling the most because in the Hawaiin ocean, the fish are beautiful and various.

I particularly like snorkeling the most because in the Hawaiian ocean, fish are beautiful and variousthere are various kinds of beautiful fish.

"the most" is correct, but children talk like this.

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