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Dec. 27, 2020

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Yesterday, my net storage system was attacked by blackmail software. This system could store up to eight terabytes. I have six terabytes of movies and TV shows in the system and I am mad at it. However, before the blackmail encrypted the movies and TV shows, I turned off the equipment quickly. I wanted to rescue the files.

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Yesterday, my net storagecomputer system was attacked by a blackmail software.

In English, we generally do not use "blackmail" software. Instead, we use malware, or virus, or something like that.

This system could store up to eight terabytes.

I have six terabytes of movies and TV shows in the system and I am mad at it.angry about this attack.

Try not to use "mad" to describe your emotion. Instead, use angry. In English, mad could also denote "crazy".

However, before the blackmailmalware?? had the chance to encrypted the movies and the TV shows, I quickly turned off the equipment quickly.

I wanted to rescue the files.

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Jack

Dec. 28, 2020

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Thank you very much.

Translation practice


Yesterday, my net storage system was attacked by blackmail software.


Yesterday, my net storagecomputer system was attacked by a blackmail software.

In English, we generally do not use "blackmail" software. Instead, we use malware, or virus, or something like that.

This system could store up to eight terabytes.


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I have six terabytes of movies and TV shows in the system and I am mad at it.


I have six terabytes of movies and TV shows in the system and I am mad at it.angry about this attack.

Try not to use "mad" to describe your emotion. Instead, use angry. In English, mad could also denote "crazy".

However, before the blackmail encrypted the movies and TV shows, I turned off the equipment quickly.


However, before the blackmailmalware?? had the chance to encrypted the movies and the TV shows, I quickly turned off the equipment quickly.

I wanted to rescue the files.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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