Jan. 26, 2021
Translation Practice
In the past decades of economic development, cities have played an important role, and the urban agglomerations composed of many cities have greatly promoted the rapid growth of a regional economy, such as the Yangtze River Delta urban agglomeration and the Pearl River Delta urban agglomeration. Among them, Shanghai, Suzhou, Guangzhou, Shenzhen and other cities have played a great role in driving the economy.
According to the comprehensive scores of urban economic scale, population size, fiscal revenue, geographical transportation, commercial trade, financial services, business environment, etc., cities can be divided into multiple “levels”. There are differences among first-tier cities, new first-tier cities, second-tier cities and third-and fourth-tier cities in China. Then, globally, there is such a distinction.
Recently, GaWc released the World City Ranking Book 2020, which contains the ranking of first-tier cities in the world. Among them, London ranks first in the world, New York ranks second in the world, Hong Kong, China ranks third in the world. Specifically, most of them come from China, the United States, India, Britain, Japan, Canada and other countries.
Five American cities were shortlisted, namely, New York, Los Angeles, Chicago, San Francisco and Boston. In terms of GDP, New York is undoubtedly the largest city in the world with GDP exceeding US$1 trillion, which is unmatched by many emerging economies. New York mainly focused on the financial industry, especially the major consortium represented by Wall Street capital crocodiles, which have a far-reaching impact on the economy of the United States and even the whole world.
At the same time, New York is not only the financial center of the United States, but also the largest financial center in the world, playing a big role in the global financial market. In New York, there are millions of people engaged in financial, securities, banking, legal consulting, accounting, auditing and other industries related to the financial industry, which makes New York the largest commercial center in the United States.
Only one city in Japan was shortlisted, namely, Tokyo. According to the ranking published from the GaWc, Tokyo ranks ninth in the world. Many people think that this ranking seriously underestimates Tokyo’s strength. In fact, this ranking is the final result of considering various factors. In terms of GDP alone, Tokyo is the second largest city in the world, ranking first in Asia.
Tokyo is the home to most of Japan’s Fortune 500 companies, especially the traditional manufacturing industry such as semiconductors, machine tools, steel, shipbuilding, motors, precision instruments, etc. It is the commercial and trade center of Japan. Many people travel to Japan, and Tokyo is also the first choice with a strong cultural and commercial atmosphere.
Three Indian cities were shortlisted, namely, Mumbai, Delhi and Bangalore. India has a population of more than 1.3 billion, which has developed rapidly in recent years, and its future development potential should not be underestimated. After decades of development, a number of big international cities have emerged in India. First of all, Mumbai, which is equivalent to Shanghai’s position in China and is the largest trading city and port city in India.
Mumbai is also the cultural and entertainment center of India, where Bollywood is located, which has driven the development of publishing houses, movies, brokerage companies and satellite network industries. Bangalore is the third largest city in India and the information industry center of India, which is equivalent to Shenzhen’s position in China, and is known as the "silicon valley” of India, with a large number of scientific and technological information enterprises gathered.
Then, among the first-tier cities in the world, there are five cities in the United States, three in India and only one in Japan. What about China? According to the ranking, there are 6 cities in China that ranked first in the world in terms of the number. The shortlisted cities are Hong Kong, Shanghai, Beijing, Guangzhou, Taipei and Shenzhen, among which, Hong Kong ranks first in China and third in the world.
China’s development in various fields in recent years has attacked worldwide attention and the influence of Chinese cities in the world is increasing day by day, especially Shanghai, which not only has rapid increase in economic volume, but also has increased its strength in aviation connectivity, finance, science and technology, industry and other fields. Shenzhen’s development speed is more rapid, its comprehensive influence in the Greater Bay Area is greatly enhanced, and it will continue to impact world-class cities in the future.
In addition, Chengdu, Tianjin, Nanking, Hangzhou and Chongqing are among the world’s Beta-rated cities. With the continued improvement of China’s comprehensive strength, these cities will have the opportunity to impact the world’s first-tier cities in the future.
Translation Practice
Cities have played an important role In the past decades of economic development, cities have played an important role, and the urban agglomeration. The urban areas composed of many cities have greatly promoted the rapid growth of a regional economyies, such as the Yangtze River Delta urban agglomerationrea and the Pearl River Delta urban agglomerationrea.
"agglomeration" is in no way a common word.
Among them, Shanghai, Suzhou, Guangzhou, Shenzhen and other cities have played a great role in driving the economy.
Saying "among them" and then adding "and other cities" is strange.
According to the comprehensive scores of urban economic scale, population size, fiscal revenue, geographical transportation, commercial trade, financial services, business environment, etc., cities can be divided into multiple “levels”.
There are differences among first-tier cities, new first-tier cities, second-tier cities and third- and fourth-tier cities in China.
Then, globally, there is such afurther distinction.
Recently, GaWc released the World City Ranking Book 2020, which contains the ranking of first-tier cities in the world.
Among them, London ranks first in the world, New York ranks second in the world,, and Hong Kong, China ranks third in the world.
You've set the context for "in the world" in the previous sentence.
Specifically, most of them come fromMost first-tier are in China, the United States, India, Britain, Japan, Canada and other countries.
Again, strange to say "specifically" and then end with "other countries". That's not really specific. Things that can move "come from" places; goods, people, animals, plants, not cities.
In terms of GDP, New York is undoubtedly the largest city in the world with a GDP exceeding US$1 trillion, which is unmatched by many emerging national economies.
New York mainly focusedfocuses mainly on the financial industry, especially the major consortium represented by Wall Street capital crocodiles, which have a far-reaching impact on the economy of the United States and even the whole world.
At the same time, New York is not only the financial center of the United States, but also the largest financial center in the world, playing a big role in the global financial market.
In New York, there are millions of people engaged in financial, securities, banking, legal consulting, accounting, auditing and other industries related to the financial industry, which makes New York the largest commercial center in the United States.
If you wan't to keep "financial" in the list, change it to "finance"
Only one city in Japan was shortlisted, namely, Tokyo.
According to the ranking published from the GaWc, Tokyo ranks ninth in the world.
Many people think that this ranking seriously underestimates Tokyo’s strength.
In factHowever, this ranking is the final result of considering various factors.
In terms of GDP alone, Tokyo is the second largest city in the world, ranking first in Asia.
Tokyo is the home to most of Japan’s Fortune 500 companies, especially the traditional manufacturing industry such awhich produces semiconductors, machine tools, steel, shipbuilding, motors, precision instruments, etc.
It is the commercial and trade center of Japan.
Many people travel to Japan, and Tokyo is also the first choice withas it has a strong cultural and commercial atmosphere.
Three Indian cities were shortlisted, namely, Mumbai, Delhi and Bangalore.
India has a population of more than 1.3 billion, which has developed rapidly in recent years, and its future development potential should not be underestimated.
After decades of development, a number of big international cities have emerged in India.
First of all, Mumbai, which is equivalent to Shanghai’s position in China and is the largest trading city and port city in India.
Mumbai is also the cultural and entertainment center of India, where Bollywood is located, which. Bollywood has driven the development of publishing houses, movies, brokerage companies and satellite network industries.
Sometimes it is best to split a very long sentence up into two, especially when you're switching focus.
Bangalore is the third largest city in India and the information industry center of India, which is equivalent to Shenzhen’s position in China, and. It is known as the "silicon valley” of India, with a large number of scientific and technological information enterprises galocated thered.
Then, aAmong the first-tier cities in the world, there are five cities are in the United States, three in India and only one in Japan.
What about China?
According to the ranking, there are 6 cities in China that ranked first in the world in terms of the number.
"that ranked first in the world in terms of the number." Only one city can rank first. Number of what?
The shortlisted cities are Hong Kong, Shanghai, Beijing, Guangzhou, Taipei and Shenzhen, among which, Hong Kong ranks first in China and third in the world.
China’s development in various fields in recent years has attrackted worldwide attention and t. The influence of Chinese cities in the world is increasing day by day, especially Shanghai, which not only has rapid increase in economic volume, but also has increased its strength in aviation connectivity, finance, science and technology, industry and other fields.
Better to break into two, though I'm still uncomfortable with the last sentence.
Shenzhen’s development speed is more rapid, i. Its comprehensive influence in the Greater Bay Area is greatly enhanced, and it will continue to impact world-class cities in the future.
In addition, Chengdu, Tianjin, Nanking, Hangzhou and Chongqing are among the world’s Bbeta-rated cities.
With the continued improvement of China’s comprehensive strength, these cities will have the opportunity to impact the world’s first-tier cities in the future.
Do you mean "make it on the list"?
Feb. 7, 2021
With the continued improvement of China’s comprehensive strength, these cities will have the opportunity to impact the world’s first-tier cities in the future.
Yes. Thank you very much.
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Translation Practice This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In the past decades of economic development, cities have played an important role, and the urban agglomerations composed of many cities have greatly promoted the rapid growth of a regional economy, such as the Yangtze River Delta urban agglomeration and the Pearl River Delta urban agglomeration. Cities have played an important role In the past decades of economic development "agglomeration" is in no way a common word. |
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Among them, Shanghai, Suzhou, Guangzhou, Shenzhen and other cities have played a great role in driving the economy.
Saying "among them" and then adding "and other cities" is strange. |
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According to the comprehensive scores of urban economic scale, population size, fiscal revenue, geographical transportation, commercial trade, financial services, business environment, etc., cities can be divided into multiple “levels”. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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There are differences among first-tier cities, new first-tier cities, second-tier cities and third-and fourth-tier cities in China. There are differences among first-tier cities, new first-tier cities, second-tier cities and third- and fourth-tier cities in China. |
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Then, globally, there is such a distinction. Then, globally, there is |
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Recently, GaWc released the World City Ranking Book 2020, which contains the ranking of first-tier cities in the world. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Among them, London ranks first in the world, New York ranks second in the world, Hong Kong, China ranks third in the world. Among them, London ranks first You've set the context for "in the world" in the previous sentence. |
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Specifically, most of them come from China, the United States, India, Britain, Japan, Canada and other countries.
Again, strange to say "specifically" and then end with "other countries". That's not really specific. Things that can move "come from" places; goods, people, animals, plants, not cities. |
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Five American cities were shortlisted, namely, New York, Los Angeles, Chicago, San Francisco and Boston. |
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In terms of GDP, New York is undoubtedly the largest city in the world with GDP exceeding US$1 trillion, which is unmatched by many emerging economies. In terms of GDP, New York is undoubtedly the largest city in the world with a GDP exceeding US$1 trillion, which is unmatched by many emerging national economies. |
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New York mainly focused on the financial industry, especially the major consortium represented by Wall Street capital crocodiles, which have a far-reaching impact on the economy of the United States and even the whole world. New York |
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At the same time, New York is not only the financial center of the United States, but also the largest financial center in the world, playing a big role in the global financial market. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In New York, there are millions of people engaged in financial, securities, banking, legal consulting, accounting, auditing and other industries related to the financial industry, which makes New York the largest commercial center in the United States. In New York, there are millions of people engaged in If you wan't to keep "financial" in the list, change it to "finance" |
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Only one city in Japan was shortlisted, namely, Tokyo. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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According to the ranking published from the GaWc, Tokyo ranks ninth in the world. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Many people think that this ranking seriously underestimates Tokyo’s strength. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In fact, this ranking is the final result of considering various factors.
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In terms of GDP alone, Tokyo is the second largest city in the world, ranking first in Asia. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Tokyo is the home to most of Japan’s Fortune 500 companies, especially the traditional manufacturing industry such as semiconductors, machine tools, steel, shipbuilding, motors, precision instruments, etc. Tokyo is the home to most of Japan’s Fortune 500 companies, especially the traditional manufacturing industry |
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It is the commercial and trade center of Japan. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Many people travel to Japan, and Tokyo is also the first choice with a strong cultural and commercial atmosphere. Many people travel to Japan, and Tokyo is also the first choice |
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Three Indian cities were shortlisted, namely, Mumbai, Delhi and Bangalore. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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India has a population of more than 1.3 billion, which has developed rapidly in recent years, and its future development potential should not be underestimated. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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After decades of development, a number of big international cities have emerged in India. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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First of all, Mumbai, which is equivalent to Shanghai’s position in China and is the largest trading city and port city in India. First of all, Mumbai |
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Mumbai is also the cultural and entertainment center of India, where Bollywood is located, which has driven the development of publishing houses, movies, brokerage companies and satellite network industries. Mumbai is also the cultural and entertainment center of India, where Bollywood is located Sometimes it is best to split a very long sentence up into two, especially when you're switching focus. |
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Bangalore is the third largest city in India and the information industry center of India, which is equivalent to Shenzhen’s position in China, and is known as the "silicon valley” of India, with a large number of scientific and technological information enterprises gathered. Bangalore is the third largest city in India and the information industry center of India, which is equivalent to Shenzhen’s position in China |
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Then, among the first-tier cities in the world, there are five cities in the United States, three in India and only one in Japan.
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What about China? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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According to the ranking, there are 6 cities in China that ranked first in the world in terms of the number. According to the ranking, there are 6 cities in China that ranked first in the world in terms of the number. "that ranked first in the world in terms of the number." Only one city can rank first. Number of what? |
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The shortlisted cities are Hong Kong, Shanghai, Beijing, Guangzhou, Taipei and Shenzhen, among which, Hong Kong ranks first in China and third in the world. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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China’s development in various fields in recent years has attacked worldwide attention and the influence of Chinese cities in the world is increasing day by day, especially Shanghai, which not only has rapid increase in economic volume, but also has increased its strength in aviation connectivity, finance, science and technology, industry and other fields. China’s development in various fields in recent years has attrac Better to break into two, though I'm still uncomfortable with the last sentence. |
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Shenzhen’s development speed is more rapid, its comprehensive influence in the Greater Bay Area is greatly enhanced, and it will continue to impact world-class cities in the future. Shenzhen’s development speed is more rapid |
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In addition, Chengdu, Tianjin, Nanking, Hangzhou and Chongqing are among the world’s Beta-rated cities. In addition, Chengdu, Tianjin, Nanking, Hangzhou and Chongqing are among the world’s |
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With the continued improvement of China’s comprehensive strength, these cities will have the opportunity to impact the world’s first-tier cities in the future. With the continued improvement of China’s comprehensive strength, these cities will have the opportunity to impact the world’s first-tier cities in the future. Do you mean "make it on the list"? |
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