Feb. 3, 2021
Translation Practice
Awesome Chengdu!
The first fourth-generation residence in China was built, with cars going up and down the stairs, and every household has an aerial courtyard.
It is understood that the community is Chengdu Xindu Urban Forest Garden, with 8 buildings, each with 30 floors.
After walking out of the subway station, you can see this huge vertical forest, which is very spectacular!
The courtyard area of each household ranges from 40 square meters to more than 100 square meters. Some of them also have aerial swimming pools and parking spaces. Cars can go up and down the stairs by lifting. This design is rare in China!
There are more than 20 kinds of plants in each courtyard, which look well-proportioned on the whole, and the courtyard has three layers of waterproof system to reinforce and protect the wall.
At present, this community is already a net-red building in Chengdu, which was bought out shortly after opening two years ago!
It seems that this fourth generation residence is quite popular, and these green plants not only help to purify the air, but also reduce the noise in the city!
Dear friends, are you optimistic about the development prospect of the fourth generation residence?
Translation Practice
Awesome Chengdu!
The first fourth-generation residence in China whas been built, with cars going up in which cars cand down the stairive to every floors, and every household has an aerialelevated courtyard.
I am not sure what "go up and down the stairs" means.
I am guessing that it meansthat cars can drive between the levels (or floors).
It is understood that tThe community is Chengdu Xindu Urban Forest Garden, withhich has 8 buildings, each with 30 floors.
"It is understood that" sounds odd here
After walking out of the subway station, you can see this huge vertical foreststructure, which is very spectacular!
"vertical forest" sounds odd, but I am not sure what best to use here.
The courtyard area of each household ranges from 40 square meters to more than 100 square meters.
Some of them also have aerialbove ground swimming pools and parking spaces.
I am not sure what this means, but I guess it means "above ground swimming pools"; these are ones where the bottom of the pool is on the ground, not below the ground level.
Cars can go up and down the stairs by liftingbetween the floors by elevator.
This is confusing. My guess is that this means there are elevators for cars.
This design is rare in China!
There are more than 20 kinds of plants in each courtyard, which look well-proportioned on the whole, and the courtyard has three layers of waterproof system to reinforce and protect the wall.
At present, this community is already a net-red building in Chengdu, which was boughtand it was sold out shortly after opening two years ago!
I do not know what "net-red" means.
"Which" where follows right after "Chengdu", but I am certain it is supposed to refer to the community, so I reworded it.
If it was bought out, that sounds like one party bought the entire thing.
If it was sold out, that sounds like every unit was sold (probably to many different parties).
It seems that this fourth generation residence is quite popular, and these green plants not only help to purify the air, but also reduce the noise in the city!
Yours is fine, but you could also say "reduce noise in the city" and I think this sounds just a bit better
Dear friends, are you optimistic about the development prospects of theis fourth generation residence?
Assuming you are referring to this particular community, then it should be "of this"
"Of the" here means you are speaking of the development prospects of the general class of all fourth generation residences.
Feb. 27, 2021
Thank you very much
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Awesome Chengdu! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The first fourth-generation residence in China was built, with cars going up and down the stairs, and every household has an aerial courtyard. The first fourth-generation residence in China I am not sure what "go up and down the stairs" means. I am guessing that it meansthat cars can drive between the levels (or floors). |
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It is understood that the community is Chengdu Xindu Urban Forest Garden, with 8 buildings, each with 30 floors.
"It is understood that" sounds odd here |
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After walking out of the subway station, you can see this huge vertical forest, which is very spectacular! After walking out of the subway station, you can see this huge vertical "vertical forest" sounds odd, but I am not sure what best to use here. |
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The courtyard area of each household ranges from 40 square meters to more than 100 square meters. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Some of them also have aerial swimming pools and parking spaces. Some of them also have a I am not sure what this means, but I guess it means "above ground swimming pools"; these are ones where the bottom of the pool is on the ground, not below the ground level. |
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Cars can go up and down the stairs by lifting. Cars can go up and down This is confusing. My guess is that this means there are elevators for cars. |
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This design is rare in China! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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There are more than 20 kinds of plants in each courtyard, which look well-proportioned on the whole, and the courtyard has three layers of waterproof system to reinforce and protect the wall. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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At present, this community is already a net-red building in Chengdu, which was bought out shortly after opening two years ago! At present, this community is already a net-red building in Chengdu, I do not know what "net-red" means. "Which" where follows right after "Chengdu", but I am certain it is supposed to refer to the community, so I reworded it. If it was bought out, that sounds like one party bought the entire thing. If it was sold out, that sounds like every unit was sold (probably to many different parties). |
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It seems that this fourth generation residence is quite popular, and these green plants not only help to purify the air, but also reduce the noise in the city! It seems that this fourth generation residence is quite popular, and these green plants not only help to purify the air, but also reduce the noise in the city! Yours is fine, but you could also say "reduce noise in the city" and I think this sounds just a bit better |
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Dear friends, are you optimistic about the development prospect of the fourth generation residence? Dear friends, are you optimistic about the development prospects of th Assuming you are referring to this particular community, then it should be "of this" "Of the" here means you are speaking of the development prospects of the general class of all fourth generation residences. |
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