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I am an employee of a company, and I had two close contacts with teacher Wang Qingxian. I almost accepted him as my teacher when he was then the editor-in-chief of the Chinese Information Newspaper. Teacher Wang is a solid person, a teacher, a friend and a brother. His writing is concise and sharp, his ideas are original and novel, his emotional intelligence is high, and his character is good. It's a fortune of Anhui for such a person to go to this position. Hope teacher Wang can benefit Anhui people, live up to the expectations of the organization, and take more care of his health. Wait to visit teacher Wang until I retire.

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Translation Practice

I am an employee of athe company, and I had two close contacts with teacher Wang Qingxian.

I think from the rest of the article that this is in reference to a particular company named Anhui?

In English we do not normally use "Teacher" as a title. If he has a PhD or equivalent, he could be called Dr.

I almost accepted him as my teacher when he was then the editor-in-chief of the Chinese Information Newspaper.

Teacher Wang is a solid person, a teacher, a friend and a brother.

We do not use "Teacher" as a title, but if you do so in your context, I do not know any other way to translate it except as you have done, so I am leaving it unchanged.

His writing is concise and sharp, his ideas are original and novel, his emotional intelligence is high, and his character is good.

Original and novel mean the same thing, I believe.

It's a fortune of Anhui forate for Anhui to have such a person to go tofor this position.

HI hope teacher Wang can benefit Anhui people, live up to the expectations of the organization, and take more care of his health.

The phrase at the end, "take more care of his health", is quite unexpected, because there is no explanation for why this phrase appears here.

WaitI hope to visit teacher Wang untilafter I retire.

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Jack

Feb. 21, 2021

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I am an employee of a company, and I had two close contacts with teacher Wang Qingxian.


I am an employee of athe company, and I had two close contacts with teacher Wang Qingxian.

I think from the rest of the article that this is in reference to a particular company named Anhui? In English we do not normally use "Teacher" as a title. If he has a PhD or equivalent, he could be called Dr.

I almost accepted him as my teacher when he was then the editor-in-chief of the Chinese Information Newspaper.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Teacher Wang is a solid person, a teacher, a friend and a brother.


Teacher Wang is a solid person, a teacher, a friend and a brother.

We do not use "Teacher" as a title, but if you do so in your context, I do not know any other way to translate it except as you have done, so I am leaving it unchanged.

His writing is concise and sharp, his ideas are original and novel, his emotional intelligence is high, and his character is good.


His writing is concise and sharp, his ideas are original and novel, his emotional intelligence is high, and his character is good.

Original and novel mean the same thing, I believe.

It's a fortune of Anhui for such a person to go to this position.


It's a fortune of Anhui forate for Anhui to have such a person to go tofor this position.

Hope teacher Wang can benefit Anhui people, live up to the expectations of the organization, and take more care of his health.


HI hope teacher Wang can benefit Anhui people, live up to the expectations of the organization, and take more care of his health.

The phrase at the end, "take more care of his health", is quite unexpected, because there is no explanation for why this phrase appears here.

Wait to visit teacher Wang until I retire.


WaitI hope to visit teacher Wang untilafter I retire.

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