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Jack

Feb. 5, 2021

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After reading the comment section, many people are not interested in his experience of studying in the United States! Studying in the United States to get a Ph.D. is only a part of his resume, so why is it the object of being attacked by people? Can't you be psychologically sunny? Do people who study abroad necessarily have a bad virtue? Characters must be poor? There is no necessary connection between, but the mentality of some people!

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Translation Practice

After reading the comment section, many people are not interested in his experience of studying in the United States!

Alternative: Studying in the United States to get a Ph.D. is only a part of his resume, so why is it the object of being attacked by peopleare people attacking just that?

Can't you be psychologically sunnymore cheerful?

I love how you wrote "psychologically sunny" but it's not a phrase we use in native English. Maybe I'll try making it one by incorporating it into my own way of speaking and writing.

Do people whoIs studying abroad necessarily have a bad virtue?

"Virtue" is an abstract concept so we don't really need the article "a" before it in this sentence. We also refer to behavior when assigning virtue. For example, people can be virtuous but their good attributes can be a virtue.

CTheir characters must be poor?

"Character" is an abstract concept so we don't necessarily make it plural when we refer to it.

There is not necessaryily a connection between them, but the mentality of some people!

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Jack

Feb. 6, 2021

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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

After reading the comment section, many people are not interested in his experience of studying in the United States!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Studying in the United States to get a Ph.D. is only a part of his resume, so why is it the object of being attacked by people?


Alternative: Studying in the United States to get a Ph.D. is only a part of his resume, so why is it the object of being attacked by peopleare people attacking just that?

Can't you be psychologically sunny?


Can't you be psychologically sunnymore cheerful?

I love how you wrote "psychologically sunny" but it's not a phrase we use in native English. Maybe I'll try making it one by incorporating it into my own way of speaking and writing.

Do people who study abroad necessarily have a bad virtue?


Do people whoIs studying abroad necessarily have a bad virtue?

"Virtue" is an abstract concept so we don't really need the article "a" before it in this sentence. We also refer to behavior when assigning virtue. For example, people can be virtuous but their good attributes can be a virtue.

Characters must be poor?


CTheir characters must be poor?

"Character" is an abstract concept so we don't necessarily make it plural when we refer to it.

There is no necessary connection between, but the mentality of some people!


There is not necessaryily a connection between them, but the mentality of some people!

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