Jan. 8, 2021
Yesterday, I had a video call with my friend. We haven’t had video calls for ages. I was very happy because I had finally seen her. She asked me how my day was and any changes for me recently. I told her that I didn’t get along well with my roommate and often quarreled. I think the key problem is that we didn’t know each other well. There have been many misunderstandings since we first met, so they affected our relationship. From her behavior, I know exactly that she dislikes me. For example, last month our water rent exceeded 300 USD. It’s too expensive. I came up with a saving money method and it is so easy. I told my roommate that maybe we can reduce our bath time and remember to turn off tap after brushing our teeth. What do you think?She didn’t say a word and with an impatient expression on his face, and then left our apartment. My friend comforted me and said that alright, sometimes, no matter if you are kind or not, there is someone who dislikes you. You can’t change their thoughts, and just be your ideal self.
She asked me how my day was and anyif anything had changesd for me recently.
This can also be "if there were any changes for me recently".
I told her that I didn’wasn't getting along well with my roommate and that we often quarreled.
I'm not sure if your disagreements with your roommate are only something that happened in the past (in which case, you were right), or if this was something that was still happening (in which case, my correction would be more appropriate).
I think the key problem is that we didn’on't know each other well.
Make sure that your tenses agree with each other. Once again, I don't know if these events are still taking place (you would use the words "is" and "don't") or if they are just something of the past (you would use "were" and "didn't").
There have been many misunderstandings since we first met, so theywhich have affected our relationship.
From her behavior, I know exactlyfor sure that she dislikes me.
I came up with a method for saving money method and it is sovery easy.
There is nothing grammatically wrong with this sentence, but it is a little awkward.
What do you think? She didn’t say a word, and with an impatient expression on hiser face, and tshen left our apartment.
Make sure that your pronouns agree with each other. When referring to women/girls, use "she" and "her". In reference to boys/men, say "he" and "him".
My friend comforted me and said that it was alright, s. Sometimes, no matter ifwhether or not you are kind or not, there is someone who dislikes you.
In English, we call this a "run-on sentence". You can usually fix this issue by starting a new sentence instead of just attaching a new idea with a comma.
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This is a very interesting story, and you obviously have a very strong understanding of the English language! There weren't too many major mistakes in this entry, which is great! Make sure, though, that you pay attention to small details. Other than that, you did a great job! Keep up the awesome work!
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Yesterday, I had a video call with my friend. |
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We haven’t had video calls for ages. |
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I was very happy because I had finally seen her. |
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She asked me how my day was and any changes for me recently. She asked me how my day was and This can also be "if there were any changes for me recently". |
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I told her that I didn’t get along well with my roommate and often quarreled. I told her that I I'm not sure if your disagreements with your roommate are only something that happened in the past (in which case, you were right), or if this was something that was still happening (in which case, my correction would be more appropriate). |
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I think the key problem is that we didn’t know each other well. I think the key problem is that we d Make sure that your tenses agree with each other. Once again, I don't know if these events are still taking place (you would use the words "is" and "don't") or if they are just something of the past (you would use "were" and "didn't"). |
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There have been many misunderstandings since we first met, so they affected our relationship. There have been many misunderstandings since we first met, |
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From her behavior, I know exactly that she dislikes me. From her behavior, I know |
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For example, last month our water rent exceeded 300 USD. |
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It’s too expensive. |
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I came up with a saving money method and it is so easy. I came up with a method for saving money There is nothing grammatically wrong with this sentence, but it is a little awkward. |
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I told my roommate that maybe we can reduce our bath time and remember to turn off tap after brushing our teeth. |
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What do you think?She didn’t say a word and with an impatient expression on his face, and then left our apartment. What do you think? She didn’t say a word, and with an impatient expression on h Make sure that your pronouns agree with each other. When referring to women/girls, use "she" and "her". In reference to boys/men, say "he" and "him". |
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My friend comforted me and said that alright, sometimes, no matter if you are kind or not, there is someone who dislikes you. My friend comforted me and said that it was alright In English, we call this a "run-on sentence". You can usually fix this issue by starting a new sentence instead of just attaching a new idea with a comma. |
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You can’t change their thoughts, and just be your ideal self. |
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