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Jack

Jan. 26, 2023

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Good morning, everyone! A new day begins. Yesterday, I taught until midnight, and now I want to record it down. I taught a small class, and a little boy in one on one lesson.

Teaching a small class makes me realize the importance of computer technology and languages! Of course, the children also made me either laugh or angry. A little boy among those students always turned off his speaker and camera, and did other things. Every time I wanted to ask him questions, I had to call him back to the lesson, but he could always give me the right answers, and he had nice handwriting and clear pronunciations, so, I didn't give him strict limits, as long as he could maintain his behavior at that time. I feel excessive demands would be counterproductive.

The little boy who took one-on-one lessons made me upset because he rejected doing anything I asked him to do. When I spent time on my phone in yesterday's class, he came. When I looked up at him, I found him smiling at me, and I felt, "Well, today's class will go well." During the class, he kept his head down. I asked him what he was doing. He said he did nothing. Then I told him, you know what? You are free in my class, and you can do whatever you want, such as paint, play games with me. As long as you listen to me, I will satisfy you with everything. I know he is very tired, and it's necessary for children to learn while they play. He was very happy. We painted words in color and reviewed many words in the process.

I always think that we should teach students according to their aptitude. Although I don't know if l have followed this rule well, I will stick to it all the way.


早上好,新的一天开始了。昨天上课上到了半夜,想过来记录一下!昨天我教了一个小班和一个一对一的小男孩:

小班教学让我体会到了电脑技术和语言的重要性。当然还有小朋友们让我又气又笑!!!其中一个小男孩总是关麦,关镜头,做一些别的事,每次都要叫他好几遍-_-||不过他都能答对,并且字很好看,音很准。所以我也不太要求他,只要他继续保持就可以。因为我觉得过度的要求反而会适得其反~

一对一的小朋友上节课让我很生气,我让他做什么他都不愿意。这节课我低头玩手机的时候他就来了,我一抬头他就对我笑,那一瞬间我就觉得,“稳了,今天的课会上得很好“。上课的时候,他一直低头,我问他在干什么,他说没什么。我就对他说,你知道吗?在我的课上你是自由的,你可以想做什么就做什么,你可以画画,可以和我玩游戏,只要你按照我的要求来,那么我都可以满足你。因为我知道他很累,在玩中学对于小孩子来说是非常有必要的。他很开心,我们涂了颜色,在这一过程中复习了很多词。

我一直觉得要因材施教,虽然自己做得也不一定好,但是我会一直努力!

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Good morning, everyone!

A new day begins.

Teaching a small class makes me realize the importance of computer technology and languages!

When I looked up at him, I found him smiling at me, and I felt, "Well, today's class will go well."

During the class, he kept his head down.

I asked him what he was doing.

He was very happy.

I always think that we should teach students according to their aptitude.

Although I don't know if l have followed this rule well, I will stick to it all the way.

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Jack

Jan. 28, 2023

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A little boy among those students always turned off his speaker (microphone?) and camera, and did other things.

I wonder if you might mean his microphone instead of speaker. If he turned off his speaker, how would he hear the teacher call him?

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Jack

Jan. 28, 2023

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When I spent time on my phone in yesterday's class, he came.

I’m not sure what this means. Did the teacher stop paying attention to the student and use his phone for personal things?

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Jack

Jan. 28, 2023

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As long as you listen to me, I will satisfy you with everything.

“Satisfying you with everything” sounds unnatural. What do you mean?

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Jack

Jan. 28, 2023

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JoeTofu

Jan. 29, 2023

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Of course, the children also made me either laugh or feel angry.

“Laugh” is a very, so the second item needs to be a verb, too.

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JoeTofu

Jan. 29, 2023

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对的。中文是“在我玩手机的时候,他进来了”,我不知道“玩手机”应该用英语怎么说。

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JoeTofu

Jan. 29, 2023

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中文是“我都可以满足你”,用英语应该怎么说?

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Jack

Jan. 29, 2023

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Jack

Jan. 29, 2023

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I would say, “While I was playing (or: wasting time) on my phone, he came in.”

Translation

Good morning, everyone!

A new day begins.

Teaching a small class makes me realize the importance of computer technology and languages!

Of course, the children also made me either laugh or angry.

I feel excessive demands would be counterproductive.

The little boy who took one-on-one lessons made me upset because he rejected doing anything I asked him to do.

When I spent time on my phone in yesterday's class, he came.

When I looked up at him, I found him smiling at me, and I felt, "Well, today's class will go well."

During the class, he kept his head down.

I asked him what he was doing.

Then I told him, you know what?

He was very happy.

We painted words in color and reviewed many words in the process.

I always think that we should teach students according to their aptitude.

Although I don't know if l have followed this rule well, I will stick to it all the way.

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Jack

Jan. 27, 2023

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Translation

A new day begins.

The little boy who took one-on-one lessons made me upset because he rejected doing anything I asked him to do.

When I spent time on my phone in yesterday's class, he came.

During the class, he kept his head down.

I asked him what he was doing.

I know he is very tired, and it's necessary for children to learn while they play.

He was very happy.

I always think that we should teach students according to their aptitude.

Although I don't know if l have followed this rule well, I will stick to it all the way.

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Jack

Jan. 26, 2023

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Good morning, everyone!


Good morning, everyone! Good morning everyone!

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A new day begins.


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Yesterday, I taught until midnight, and now I want to record it down.


Yesterday, I taughtwas teaching until midnight, and now I wantish to recordwrite it down. Yesterday, I was teaching until midnight, and now I wish to write it down.

- the past progressive

Yesterday, I taught until midnight, and now I want to recordwrite it down. Yesterday, I taught until midnight, and now I want to write it down.

That's a long day!

Yesterday, I taught until midnight, and now I want to record it down. Yesterday, I taught until midnight, and now I want to record it.

I taught a small class, and a little boy in one on one lesson.


I taught aone small class, and then a little boy induring/in a one on one lesson. I taught one small class and then a little boy during/in a one on one lesson.

I taught a small class, and a little boy in a one on one lesson. I taught a small class and a little boy in a one on one lesson.

I taught a small class, and a little boy in a one -on -one lesson. I taught a small class, and a little boy in a one-on-one lesson.

Teaching a small class makes me realize the importance of computer technology and languages!


Teaching a small class makes me further realize the importance of computer technology and languages (in every day life)! Teaching a small class makes me further realize the importance of computer technology and languages (in every day life)!

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Of course, the children also made me either laugh or angry.


Of course, the children also either made me either laugh or angry. Of course, the children also either made me laugh or angry.

Word order

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Of course, the children also made me either laugh or feel angry. Of course, the children also made me either laugh or feel angry.

“Laugh” is a very, so the second item needs to be a verb, too.

A little boy among those students always turned off his speaker and camera, and did other things.


A little boy among those students always turned off his speaker and camera, and didmong other things. A little boy among those students always turned off his speaker and camera, among other things.

A little boy among those students always turned off his speaker and camera, and did other things. A little boy among those students always turned off his speaker and camera and did other things.

A little boy among those students always turned off his speaker (microphone?) and camera, and did other things. A little boy among those students always turned off his speaker (microphone?) and camera, and did other things.

I wonder if you might mean his microphone instead of speaker. If he turned off his speaker, how would he hear the teacher call him?

Every time I wanted to ask him questions, I had to call him back to the lesson, but he could always give me the right answers, and he had nice handwriting and clear pronunciations, so, I didn't give him strict limits, as long as he could maintain his behavior at that time.


Every time I wanted to ask him questions, I had to call him back to the lesson, but he could always give me the right answers, and he had nice handwriting and a clear pronunciations, so, I didn't give him strict limits, as long as he could maintained his behavior atur, that time.is. Every time I wanted to ask him questions, I had to call him back to the lesson, but he could always give me the right answers, and he had nice handwriting and a clear pronunciation, so, I didn't give him strict limits, as long as he maintained his behaviour, that is.

Every time I wanted to ask him a questions, I had to call him back to the lesson, but he could always give me the right answers, and h. He had nice handwriting and clear pronunciations, so, I didn't give him strict limits, as long as he could maintain his behavior at that time. Every time I wanted to ask him a question, I had to call him back to the lesson, but he could always give me the right answers. He had nice handwriting and clear pronunciations, so, I didn't give him strict limits, as long as he could maintain his behavior at that time.

Every time I wanted to ask him questions, I had to call him back to the lesson, but he could always give me the right answers, and he had nice handwriting and clear pronunciations, so, I didn't give him strict limits, as long as he could maintain his behavior at that time. Every time I wanted to ask him questions, I had to call him back to the lesson, but he could always give me the right answers, and he had nice handwriting and clear pronunciation, so, I didn't give him strict limits, as long as he could maintain his behavior at that time.

I feel excessive demands would be counterproductive.


I feel that introducing excessive demands would be counterproductive. I feel that introducing excessive demands would be counterproductive.

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The little boy who took one-on-one lessons made me upset because he rejected doing anything I asked him to do.


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The little boy who took one-on-one lessons made me upset because he [rejected doing | refused to do] anything I asked him to do. The little boy who took one-on-one lessons made me upset because he [rejected doing | refused to do] anything I asked him to do.

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When I spent time on my phone in yesterday's class, he came.


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When I spent time on my phone in yesterday's class, he came. When I spent time on my phone in yesterday's class, he came.

I’m not sure what this means. Did the teacher stop paying attention to the student and use his phone for personal things?

When I looked up at him, I found him smiling at me, and I felt, "Well, today's class will go well."


When I looked up at him, I found him smiling at me, and I felthought, "Well, today's class will go well." When I looked up at him, I found him smiling at me, and I thought, "Well, today's class will go well."

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During the class, he kept his head down.


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I asked him what he was doing.


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He said he did nothing.


He said he didwas doing nothing. He said he was doing nothing.

- past progressive

He said he did nowasn't doing anything. He said he wasn't doing anything.

He said he did nowasn’t doing anything. He said he wasn’t doing anything.

Then I told him, you know what?


Then I tolasked him, you know what? Then I asked him, you know what?

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Then I told him, y“You know what? Then I told him, “You know what?

You are free in my class, and you can do whatever you want, such as paint, play games with me.


You are free to do as you wish during my classes, and you can do whatever you want, such as paint,ing and playing games with me. You are free to do as you wish during my classes, and you can do whatever you want, such as painting and playing games with me.

You are free in my class, and you can do whatever you want, such as paint, or play games with me. You are free in my class, and you can do whatever you want, such as paint or play games with me.

You are free in my class, and you can do whatever you want, such as paint, or play games with me. You are free in my class, and you can do whatever you want, such as paint or play games with me.

As long as you listen to me, I will satisfy you with everything.


As long as you listen to me, I will satisfy you with everything.you and I will remain content.” As long as you listen to me, you and I will remain content.”

C2 level sophistication

As long as you listen to me, I will satisfyhelp you with everything. As long as you listen to me, I will help you with everything.

As long as you listen to me, I will satisfy you with everything. As long as you listen to me, I will satisfy you with everything.

“Satisfying you with everything” sounds unnatural. What do you mean?

I know he is very tired, and it's necessary for children to learn while they play.


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I know he iwas very tired, and it's necessary for children to learn while they play. I know he was very tired, and it's necessary for children to learn while they play.

I knoew he iwas very tired, and believed it's necessary for children to learn while they play. I knew he was very tired, and believed it's necessary for children to learn while they play.

He was very happy.


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We painted words in color and reviewed many words in the process.


We painted words in color and thus reviewed many words in the process. We painted words in color and thus reviewed many words in the process.

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We painted words in different colors and reviewed many words in the process. We painted words in different colors and reviewed many words in the process.

I always think that we should teach students according to their aptitude.


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Although I don't know if l have followed this rule well, I will stick to it all the way.


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