Dec. 25, 2020
Translation
Tomorrow is the birthday of Mr. Yun’s son and he wants to buy his son a new car. His son wants to learn Chinese medicine in Xi’an next year, so he can cycle to school. Mr. Yun thinks it’s a good idea to buy a new car.
Translation
Tomorrow is the birthday of Mr. Yun’s son, and he wants to buy his son a new car.
His son wants to learn Chinese medicine in Xi’an next year, so he can cycle to school.
Mr. Yun thinks it’s a good idea to buy a new car.
Feedback
I checked your other translations too. The commas I insert aren't necessary, I think, but it is technically correct to use a comma and conjunction to connect two independent clauses. (Based on what I remember from grade school grammar.)
Dec. 26, 2020
Thank you very much.
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Tomorrow is the birthday of Mr. Yun’s son and he wants to buy his son a new car. Tomorrow is the birthday of Mr. Yun’s son, and he wants to buy his son a new car. |
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His son wants to learn Chinese medicine in Xi’an next year, so he can cycle to school. His son wants to learn Chinese medicine in Xi’an next year |
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Mr. Yun thinks it’s a good idea to buy a new car. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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