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mttinez

Aug. 17, 2021

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Dear Sr or Madam

I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the recent changes to the book club membership and my opinion about renovation of the club meeting room.
Firsly, the increase in the membership fees is very large. I understand the need to meet your cost, but I would suggest that you increase the membership fees by small amount, such as 5%. I would also recommend that you provide more advanced notice of such increases so that members can plan for such changes to their monthly budget.
Secondly, I do not mind club meetings will be held in the back room of the bookshop, however, regarding the issue of celebrating of club meetings every Monday, I was very disappointed to read the news because I prefer to meet on Friday. May I suggest that you change the meeting day and provide details of this day on your website?

I look forward to receiving your reply and response to my suggestion.

Your faithfully.

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Dear Sr or Madam

Firstly, the increase in the membership fees is very largehigh.

I understand the need to meet your cost, but I would suggest that you increase the membership fees by small amount, such as 5%.

I would also recommend that you provide more advanced notice of such increases so that members can plan for such changes to their monthly budget.

Secondly, I do not mind club meetings will be held in the back room of the bookshop, however, regarding the issue of celebrating of club meetings every Monday, I was very disappointed to read the news because I prefer to meet on Friday.

May I suggest that you change the meeting day and provide details of this day on your website?

I look forward to receiving your reply and response to my suggestion.

Yours faithfully.

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mttinez

Aug. 17, 2021

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thank you!!

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I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the recent changes to the book club membership and my opinion about renovation of the club meeting room.


Firsly, the increase in the membership fees is very large.


Firstly, the increase in the membership fees is very largehigh.

I understand the need to meet your cost, but I would suggest that you increase the membership fees by small amount, such as 5%.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I would also recommend that you provide more advanced notice of such increases so that members can plan for such changes to their monthly budget.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Secondly, I do not mind club meetings will be held in the back room of the bookshop, however, regarding the issue of celebrating of club meetings every Monday, I was very disappointed to read the news because I prefer to meet on Friday.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

May I suggest that you change the meeting day and provide details of this day on your website?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I look forward to receiving your reply and response to my suggestion.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Your faithfully.


Yours faithfully.

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