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Trainer instructor

Why do people want to be trainer instructor? Over world the gym has become one of the most popular sports which people practice. In order that create more incentives to help the health of people, also this helps them in terms of confidence and progress. Because if you want to change your aspect, you will keep doing it until you achieve. Moreover, the gym changes your thoughts such as habits, food and preferences. Trainers want to be with their process, even if you do not see the results, they will advise you not just on the exercise or food, they will be you all the process even in the moments which you want to give up.

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Trainer instructoPersonal Trainer

If you are talking about a person who teaches you how to exercise at a gym, that person is usually called a personal trainer.

Why do people want to be trainer instructocome a personal trainer?

If you are talking about a person who teaches you how to exercise at a gym, that person is usually called a personal trainer.

Over world the gymAcross the world, more and more people hasve become one of the most popular sports which people practiceen starting to get into the gym and workout.

In order thato create more incentives to help the health of people, also this helps them in terms of confidence and progress.

This sentence does not seem to really make sense to me. It seems like you put two different thoughts together with a comma. Also, the story does not really flow from the previous sentence to this one. It would help to have a transition from how the gym is becoming popular to this sentence.

Something like this would maybe be better depending on what you are trying to convey:

- Because of this people have become more interested in finding personal trainers to help them feel more confident in the gym and more more rapidly toward their fitness goals.

Because if you want to change your aspect, you will keep doing it until you achieve.

The transition is not clear from previous sentence to this one.

Moreover, the gymworking out changes influence your thoughts such ason things like habits, food and preferences.

Still, the transition to this sentence is rough. The gym does not really change your thoughts which is why I suggested changing it to saying the action of working out influences your thinking on the different topic. In order to get better at the gym, people would probably start to do research on those topics.

Trainers want to be with their process, even if you do not see the results, they will advise you not just on thehey will advise you on many things surrounding fitness such as exercise orand food,. Finally they will be you all thalso be with you through the whole process, even in the moments which you want to give up.

Feedback

Overall I want to congratulate you on the fact that you are practicing your English writing. That is awesome and I respect that you took the time to write this out. Keep it up.

As far as feedback, as a native English speaker, the story was quite hard to follow. There was not a clear line of thought from beginning to end. From what I could gather, I believe you were trying to talk about why people are interested in finding and using a personal trainer.

So I would probably recommend working on connecting your sentences together so that the thoughts all flow together.

Again, keep on practicing and improving on your writing! I wish you well in your language learning journey!

Trainer instructorPhysical Trainers

Why do people want to be trainer instructorphysical trainers?

Physical trainer - somebody who makes workout plans for people and motivates them to go to the gym, etc
Fitness instructor - somebody who runs a fitness class, e.g. pilates

Over worldAll over the world, going to the gym has become one of the most popular sports which people practicways people exercise.

Going to the gym isn't a sport. Weightlifting and running are both sports that people do at the gym, though.

In order thatPhysical trainers create more incentives to help the health of people, also thispeople stay healthy, and helps them in terms of confidence and progress.

Because if you want to change youran aspect of your life, you will keep doworking at it until you achieve your goal.

Moreover, the gym changes your thoughts such as habits, food and preferences.

Trainers want to be withelp you through their process, even if you do not see the results, t. They will advise you not just on the exercise or food, theybut will be you all ththroughout the entire process, even in the moments whichen you want to give up.

Trainer instructoFitness Trainer

Fitness Trainer or Personal Trainer are the most common terms.

Why do people want to be trainer instructoa fitness trainer?

Over worldAround the world, going to the gym has become one of the most popular sports which people practicefitness activities that people participate in.

Around the world or across the world are most common. “The world over…” is a less common phrase.

“The gym” references only the place. It’s not an activity itself. So we’d say “going to the gym” to speak generally about doing fitness activities.

Going to the gym isn’t a “sport” per se. To speak about a sport, we would typically reference weight training or cardio training, etc. If you want to speak more generally we just say “going to the gym” or “working out”.

In order thatFitness Trainers create more incentives to help the health of people, also this. This also helps them in terms of confidence and making progress.

I’m not 100% clear what you wanted to say.

Because if you want to change your asppectarance, you will keep doing itworking until you achieve it.

Trainers want to behelp you stick with their process, even if you do not see the results, t. They will advise you not just on the exercise or food, but they will be you all the processalso help you stay consistent even in the moments which you want to give up.

Moreover, the gym changes your thoughts such as habits, food and preferences.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Moreover, the gymworking out changes influence your thoughts such ason things like habits, food and preferences.

Still, the transition to this sentence is rough. The gym does not really change your thoughts which is why I suggested changing it to saying the action of working out influences your thinking on the different topic. In order to get better at the gym, people would probably start to do research on those topics.

Trainers want to be with their process, even if you do not see the results, they will advise you not just on the exercise or food, they will be you all the process even in the moments which you want to give up.


Trainers want to behelp you stick with their process, even if you do not see the results, t. They will advise you not just on the exercise or food, but they will be you all the processalso help you stay consistent even in the moments which you want to give up.

Trainers want to be withelp you through their process, even if you do not see the results, t. They will advise you not just on the exercise or food, theybut will be you all ththroughout the entire process, even in the moments whichen you want to give up.

Trainers want to be with their process, even if you do not see the results, they will advise you not just on thehey will advise you on many things surrounding fitness such as exercise orand food,. Finally they will be you all thalso be with you through the whole process, even in the moments which you want to give up.

Trainer instructor


Trainer instructoFitness Trainer

Fitness Trainer or Personal Trainer are the most common terms.

Trainer instructorPhysical Trainers

Trainer instructoPersonal Trainer

If you are talking about a person who teaches you how to exercise at a gym, that person is usually called a personal trainer.

Why do people want to be trainer instructor?


Why do people want to be trainer instructoa fitness trainer?

Why do people want to be trainer instructorphysical trainers?

Physical trainer - somebody who makes workout plans for people and motivates them to go to the gym, etc Fitness instructor - somebody who runs a fitness class, e.g. pilates

Why do people want to be trainer instructocome a personal trainer?

If you are talking about a person who teaches you how to exercise at a gym, that person is usually called a personal trainer.

Over world the gym has become one of the most popular sports which people practice.


Over worldAround the world, going to the gym has become one of the most popular sports which people practicefitness activities that people participate in.

Around the world or across the world are most common. “The world over…” is a less common phrase. “The gym” references only the place. It’s not an activity itself. So we’d say “going to the gym” to speak generally about doing fitness activities. Going to the gym isn’t a “sport” per se. To speak about a sport, we would typically reference weight training or cardio training, etc. If you want to speak more generally we just say “going to the gym” or “working out”.

Over worldAll over the world, going to the gym has become one of the most popular sports which people practicways people exercise.

Going to the gym isn't a sport. Weightlifting and running are both sports that people do at the gym, though.

Over world the gymAcross the world, more and more people hasve become one of the most popular sports which people practiceen starting to get into the gym and workout.

In order that create more incentives to help the health of people, also this helps them in terms of confidence and progress.


In order thatFitness Trainers create more incentives to help the health of people, also this. This also helps them in terms of confidence and making progress.

I’m not 100% clear what you wanted to say.

In order thatPhysical trainers create more incentives to help the health of people, also thispeople stay healthy, and helps them in terms of confidence and progress.

In order thato create more incentives to help the health of people, also this helps them in terms of confidence and progress.

This sentence does not seem to really make sense to me. It seems like you put two different thoughts together with a comma. Also, the story does not really flow from the previous sentence to this one. It would help to have a transition from how the gym is becoming popular to this sentence. Something like this would maybe be better depending on what you are trying to convey: - Because of this people have become more interested in finding personal trainers to help them feel more confident in the gym and more more rapidly toward their fitness goals.

Because if you want to change your aspect, you will keep doing it until you achieve.


Because if you want to change your asppectarance, you will keep doing itworking until you achieve it.

Because if you want to change youran aspect of your life, you will keep doworking at it until you achieve your goal.

Because if you want to change your aspect, you will keep doing it until you achieve.

The transition is not clear from previous sentence to this one.

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