Nov. 25, 2019
Train tickets
I took in the train this morning and then walk up to my seat which was occupied another person. I asked them this is my seat but he and him friends insisted their seats. Then it hit hard, I was looking at wrong ticket which is valid for another train.
I felt so ashamed, and I left with saying "I am sorry" and walking up to my actual seat.
I took in the train this morning and then walked up to my seat which was occupied by another person.
walk is present tense, walked is past tense (I walked, you walked).
I asked them th"is this my seat?", but he and hims friends insisted it was their seats.
his is possessive, him isn't
Then it hit hardme, I was looking at the wrong ticket, which iwas valid for another train.
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I felt so ashamed, and I left withby saying "I am sorry" and walking up to my actual seat.
Nov. 26, 2019
thank you!
I took igot on the train this morning and then walked up to my seat, which was occupied by another person.
Saying you got on the train and then walked up to your seat makes more sense than saying you took the train and then found your seat 🙂
I asked them tsaid, “This is my seat,” but he and hims friends insisted their seatat it was theirs.
Then it hit hard,me: I was looking at the wrong ticket, which iwas valid for another train.
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Try not to dwell on it ❤️ These things happen to everyone.
Nov. 25, 2019
After writing this and reading these comments, this case left me a smile on my face. Thank you.
I took in the train this morning and then walked up to my seat, which was occupied by another person.
I askedsaid to them t"This is my seat", but he and hims friends insisted their seatson the opposite.
Then it hit me hard,. I was looking at the wrong ticket, which iwas valid for another train.
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The other correction was slightly wrong, sorry!
I felt so ashamed, andso I left withby saying "I am sorry" and walkinged up to my actual seat.
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Don't feel bad about it, everyone makes this kind of mistake from time to time!
Nov. 25, 2019
Yes, I try to think kind of like a funny story, that I will remember and laugh about it. Thank you by the way.
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I took in the train this morning and then walk up to my seat which was occupied another person. I took I Saying you got on the train and then walked up to your seat makes more sense than saying you took the train and then found your seat 🙂 I took walk is present tense, walked is past tense (I walked, you walked). |
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I asked them this is my seat but he and him friends insisted their seats. I
I asked them his is possessive, him isn't |
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Then it hit hard, I was looking at wrong ticket which is valid for another train. Then it hit me hard The other correction was slightly wrong, sorry!
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I felt so ashamed, and I left with saying "I am sorry" and walking up to my actual seat. I felt so ashamed, I felt so ashamed, |
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