Sept. 2, 2022
There is a train ticket called " Seishun 18 kippu".
This is a ticket for free-to-ride on JR regular trains, and one ticket can be used for five days.
I bought this ticket this summer.
I have two more days left, so I'd like to go to Hamamatsu tomorrow.
I'm looking forward to it.
Here's the sample picture of the ticket
https://contents.trafficnews.jp/icatch/000/007/095/large_180223_18kippu_01.jpg
”青春18きっぷ”という電車のきっぷがあります。
これはJRの普通列車乗り放題のきっぷで、1枚で5日分使うことができます。
この夏、このきっぷを買いました。
あと2日分残っているので、明日は浜松方面に行ってみたいと思います。
楽しみです。
This is a ticket forcan be used for five days as a free-to-ride on JRpass on regular JR trains, and one ticket can be used for five days.
Your sentence structure is grammatically correct but doesn't feel very natural :)
I have two more days left, so I'd like to go decided to go to Hamamatsu tomorrow.¶
OR I have two more days left, so I'm going to Hamamatsu tomorrow.
"I'd like" is used to describe hypothetical situations or to make a polite request. Here, because you say "I'm looking forward to it", it seems that it will definitely happen so you need a future meaning "I'm going" OR a decisive verb like "to decide" in the past to confirm that you are going.
I'm looking forward to it.
Here's the sample picture of the ticket
https://contents.trafficnews.jp/icatch/000/007/095/large_180223_18kippu_01.jpg
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Great job!
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There is a train ticket called " Seishun 18 kippu"."
This is a ticket for free-to-rideallows unlimited travel on JR regular JR trains, and one ticket can be used for five days.
I bought this ticketone this summer.
I have two more days left, so I'd like to go to Hamamatsu tomorrow.
I'm looking forward to it.
Here's thea sample picture of the ticket.
https://contents.trafficnews.jp/icatch/000/007/095/large_180223_18kippu_01.jpg
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いいですね!楽しんで下さい。上手に書けています!
There is a type of train ticket called " Seishun 18 kKippu".
Just being more specific, and capitalising the whole name of the ticket
This is a ticket for free-to-allows for unlimited rides on JR regular trains, and one ticket can be used for five days.
I think "unlimited rides" is the best expression here
I bought thise ticket this summer.
I have two more days left, so I'd like to go to Hamamatsu tomorrow.
I'm looking forward to it.
Here's the sample picture of the ticket
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Great job overall, very clear and concise! I also got to learn about something useful for travelling around Japan. :)
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