I'd like to write down about two recent experiences I had with dragonflies.

The first;1)

When the train stopped at a station and athe doors opened, two dragonflies connecting ofed to each other fried ilew onto the train.

Thosey were pretty big dragonflies, so the other custompassengers were also surprised.

I worried that the doors might close withon the dragonflies in, but they left before the doors closed.

I'd like to write the second on nextabout my second experience in my next journal entry.

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I'd like to write about my second experience in the next journal entry.

I'd like to write down about two recent experiences I had with dragonflies.

The first;:

When the train stoped at a station and athe door opened, two dragonflies connecting ofed to each other friedlew into the train.

Thosey were pretty big dragonflies, so other custompassengers were also surprised.

I worried that the door might close with the dragonflies instill inside (the train), but they left before the door closed.

I'd like to write about the second onexperience in my next entry.

The Train and Dragonfly: Part 1

Just for a more "complete" title!

I'd like to write down about two recent experiences I had with dragonflies.

This is the first; one.

A semi-colon is usually to link two separate sentences together, not really to list something

When the train stopped at a station and athe door opened, two dragonflies connecting ofed to each other friedlew into the train.

Using all past tense for this sentence

Thosey were pretty big dragonflies, so other custompassengers were also surprised.

The best word for people on train is "passengers"

I was worried that the door might close with the dragonflies instill inside, but they left before the door closed.

I'd like to write about the second onexperience in my next entry.

Just fleshing out the sentence!