July 6, 2021
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I've traveled for a few days. During that time I ate lots of food. It was a trip with my girlfriend and her families, they are so nice people at all. We walked along the trail which is near the sea. The weather center forecasted a monsoon season was gonna be started and there was pouring rain. But it wasn't fortunately. First day, there was just a bit raindrops falling so we could walked into the forest. That was on an island and that was a gorgeous natural forest. There were many trees wasn't familiar. We were all kept admiring. Fog on the top of the mountains gives an air of mellow.
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I've traveled for a few days.
During that time I ate lots of food.
It was a trip with my girlfriend and her familiesy, they are all so nice people at all.
We walked along the trail which is near the sea.
The weather center forecasted apredicted that the monsoon season was gonna being to started and that there wasould be pouring rain.
But it wasn't fortunately.Fortunately, monsoon season didn't arrive yet.
FOn the first day, there was just a bit raindrops falling so we could walked into the forest.a light drizzle and we could still go on a forest walk.
ThatOur walk was on an island and that was a gorgeous natural forest.
There were many trees wasn't unfamiliar trees.
We were all kept admiring the landscape.
Fog on the top of the mountains giaves an air of mellow. mellow sense to the air.
July 6, 2021
The weather center forecasted apredicted that the monsoon season was gonna being to started and that there wasould be pouring rain.
Note “gonna” isn’t really a word in English. It’s used very casually in speech and texting (as a lazy version of “going to”) but should be avoided in writing.
trail
I've traveled for a few days.
During that time I ate lots of food.
It was a trip with my girlfriend and her familiesy, they are soall such nice people at all.
We walked along thea trail which is near the sea.
The weather center forecasted a monsoon season was gonna be started and, and that there wasould be pouring rain.
But ithere wasn't fortunately.
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"was just a bit of rain falling" or "were just a few raindrops falling"
That was on an island and that was a gorgeous natural forest.
There were many trees wasthat weren't familiar.
"wasn't familiar" - one thing (one tree)
"weren't familiar" - multiple things (many trees)
We were all kept admiring them.
Fog on the top of the mountains giaves an air of mellow.
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