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March 1, 2025

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Traditional Dishes In My Country

We have a lot of traditional dishes here where I live.
For example, we have "pão de queijo" (bread of cheese), as the name says, it is a bread made with cheese. I would attach an image example if I could.
We also have another one called "brigadeiro", is like a little ball made of chocolate, but we also have another versions made with other recipes than chocolate.
These dishes are traditional in Brazil.

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Traditional Dishes In My Country

We have a lot of traditional dishes here where I live.

We have a lot of traditional dishes where I live.

For example, we have "pão de queijo" (bread of cheese), as the name says, it is a bread made with cheese.

I would attach an image example if I could.

I would attach an image as an example if I could.

We also have another one called "brigadeiro", is like a little ball made of chocolate, but we also have another versions made with other recipes than chocolate.

We also have another one called "brigadeiro", which is like a little ball made of chocolate, but we also have another versions made with other ingredients rather than chocolate.

These dishes are traditional in Brazil.

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March 2, 2025

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Thank you :D

Traditional Dishes Iin My Country

We have a lot of traditional dishes here where I live.

For example, we have "pão de queijo" (bread of cheese), as the name says, it is a bread made with cheese.

I would attach an image example if I could.

We also have another one called "brigadeiro", which is like a little ball made of chocolate, but we also have another versions made with other recipesingredients other than chocolate.

These dishes are traditional in Brazil.

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Good work.

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llimas

March 2, 2025

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Thank you :D

Traditional Dishes In My Country

We have a lot of traditional dishes here where I live.

While it is ok to say "here where I live", it is not necessary as "where I live“ implies that you live there.

For example, we have "pão de queijo" (bread of cheese), as the name says, it is a bread made with cheese.

I would attach an image example if I could.

We also have another one called "brigadeiro", it is like a little ball made of chocolate, but w. We also have another versions made with other recipes thaningredients besides chocolate.

If I am understanding what you are saying here, it would be best to split up the sentence into two. "Another version" would be ok if you are only referring to 1 other version, but because it is plural, you would want to say "other versions". Because I added "other" I removed the second other as it is redundant. I changed "recipe" to "ingredient" from my understanding of what you are trying to say. Chocolate isn't the recipe, it is merely an ingredient in the recipe for brigadeiro. Although I may be misinterpreting what you are trying to say.

These dishes are traditional dishes in Brazil.

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llimas

March 2, 2025

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Thank you :D

Traditional Dishes In My Country


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We have a lot of traditional dishes here where I live.


We have a lot of traditional dishes here where I live.

While it is ok to say "here where I live", it is not necessary as "where I live“ implies that you live there.

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We have a lot of traditional dishes here where I live.

We have a lot of traditional dishes where I live.

For example, we have "pão de queijo" (bread of cheese), as the name says, it is a bread made with cheese.


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I would attach an image example if I could.


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I would attach an image example if I could.

I would attach an image example if I could.

I would attach an image as an example if I could.

We also have another one called "brigadeiro", is like a little ball made of chocolate, but we also have another versions made with other recipes than chocolate.


We also have another one called "brigadeiro", it is like a little ball made of chocolate, but w. We also have another versions made with other recipes thaningredients besides chocolate.

If I am understanding what you are saying here, it would be best to split up the sentence into two. "Another version" would be ok if you are only referring to 1 other version, but because it is plural, you would want to say "other versions". Because I added "other" I removed the second other as it is redundant. I changed "recipe" to "ingredient" from my understanding of what you are trying to say. Chocolate isn't the recipe, it is merely an ingredient in the recipe for brigadeiro. Although I may be misinterpreting what you are trying to say.

We also have another one called "brigadeiro", which is like a little ball made of chocolate, but we also have another versions made with other recipesingredients other than chocolate.

We also have another one called "brigadeiro", is like a little ball made of chocolate, but we also have another versions made with other recipes than chocolate.

We also have another one called "brigadeiro", which is like a little ball made of chocolate, but we also have another versions made with other ingredients rather than chocolate.

These dishes are traditional in Brazil.


These dishes are traditional dishes in Brazil.

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