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June 3, 2024

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I did not feel well for a long time, there was an ache in my stomach and my head for overstress. According to the physical check result at the beginning of this year, I chose to take some traditional Chinese medicine treatment this afternoon.by the way , I also want to recommend traditional Chinese medicine as another optional measure if you have a chronic and slight illness .
Characteristics: it mainly consists of herbal medicine,acupuncture,massage,cupping glass,gua sha and so on. The most magical is all treatments mentioned before are based on a theory: the body has its specific and invisible energy pipeline as opposed to blood vessels and nerves, and everything in the world is composed of 金(mental),木(wood),水(water),火 (fire),土(earth) five elements and they have a relationship of resisting and insisting to each other.all the means aim at rebalance energy of five elements.

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I did not feel well for a long time, there was an ache in my. I had a stomachache and my head forache from overstress.

According toBased on the physical check result at the beginning of thise year, I chose to take some traditional Chinese medicine treatment this afternoon.b By the way , I also want to recommend traditional Chinese medicine as another optional measure if you have a chronic and slight illness .

Characteristics: it mainly consists of herbal medicine, acupuncture, massage, cupping glass, gua sha and so on.

The most magical ispart is that all treatments mentioned before are based on a theory: the body has its specific and invisible energy pipeline as opposed to blood vessels and nerves, and everything in the world is composed of 金(mental),木(wood),水(water),火 (fire),), and 土(earth): the five elements and they have a relationship of resisting and inassisting to each other.a All the meanthods aim at rebalancing the energy of the five elements.

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springrain

June 4, 2024

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thank you very much

traditional chinese medicine treament

I did not feel well for a long time, there was an ache in my stomach and my head for over, my stomach and head ached because of stress.

Your version was also correct, but it is more natural to use 'ached' instead of 'there was an ache'.

According to theBecause of my physical check result at the beginning of this year, I chose to take some traditional Chinese medicine treatment this afternoon.b By the way , I also want to recommend traditional Chinese medicine as another optional measure if you have a chronic and slight illness .

'According to' implies the physical check told you to take traditional Chinese medicine, but using 'because of' means you decided to take medicine after seeing the result.

Characteristics: it mainly consists of herbal medicine, acupuncture, massage, cupping glass, gua sha and so on.

The most magical ispart of all treatments mentioned before are based on a theory: the body has its specific and invisible energy pipeline as opposed to blood vessels and nerves, and everything in the world is composed of five elements 金(mental),木(wood),水(water),火 (fire),土(earth) five elements and they have a relationship of resisting and insisting to each other.a All the meantreatments aim at rebalancing the energy of the five elements.

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Traditional Chinese medicine is very interesting!

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springrain

June 4, 2024

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thank you very much

Characteristics: it mainly consists of herbal medicine,acupuncture,massage,cupping glass,gua sha and so on.


Characteristics: it mainly consists of herbal medicine, acupuncture, massage, cupping glass, gua sha and so on.

Characteristics: it mainly consists of herbal medicine, acupuncture, massage, cupping glass, gua sha and so on.

The most magical is all treatments mentioned before are based on a theory: the body has its specific and invisible energy pipeline as opposed to blood vessels and nerves, and everything in the world is composed of 金(mental),木(wood),水(water),火 (fire),土(earth) five elements and they have a relationship of resisting and insisting to each other.all the means aim at rebalance energy of five elements.


The most magical ispart of all treatments mentioned before are based on a theory: the body has its specific and invisible energy pipeline as opposed to blood vessels and nerves, and everything in the world is composed of five elements 金(mental),木(wood),水(water),火 (fire),土(earth) five elements and they have a relationship of resisting and insisting to each other.a All the meantreatments aim at rebalancing the energy of the five elements.

The most magical ispart is that all treatments mentioned before are based on a theory: the body has its specific and invisible energy pipeline as opposed to blood vessels and nerves, and everything in the world is composed of 金(mental),木(wood),水(water),火 (fire),), and 土(earth): the five elements and they have a relationship of resisting and inassisting to each other.a All the meanthods aim at rebalancing the energy of the five elements.

I did not feel well for a long time, there was an ache in my stomach and my head for overstress.


I did not feel well for a long time, there was an ache in my stomach and my head for over, my stomach and head ached because of stress.

Your version was also correct, but it is more natural to use 'ached' instead of 'there was an ache'.

I did not feel well for a long time, there was an ache in my. I had a stomachache and my head forache from overstress.

According to the physical check result at the beginning of this year, I chose to take some traditional Chinese medicine treatment this afternoon.by the way , I also want to recommend traditional Chinese medicine as another optional measure if you have a chronic and slight illness .


According to theBecause of my physical check result at the beginning of this year, I chose to take some traditional Chinese medicine treatment this afternoon.b By the way , I also want to recommend traditional Chinese medicine as another optional measure if you have a chronic and slight illness .

'According to' implies the physical check told you to take traditional Chinese medicine, but using 'because of' means you decided to take medicine after seeing the result.

According toBased on the physical check result at the beginning of thise year, I chose to take some traditional Chinese medicine treatment this afternoon.b By the way , I also want to recommend traditional Chinese medicine as another optional measure if you have a chronic and slight illness .

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