Nov. 18, 2019
Tourists in Kyoto station
I've been to Kyoto last weekend. Going to Kyoto station to take a city bus, I got paralyzed at too many people.
There were some tentative information desks for many tourists, and the tourists got the number of bus stop there for their destinations, then they stood in a so long line and got on a bus each. Busses were coming one after another.
I felt as if I were a potato before becoming crisps in a factory. Fresh potatoes are collected and separate for each line such as Salt, Consomme, Sour Onion and etc. and then they are put in a bag and ship one after another like an endless assembly line operation.
The weather was beautiful. I felt hot even though it was late November. I thought the leaves are slower to turn red this year than usual.
先週末は京都に行ってきました。市バスに乗ろうと京都駅に行くと、あまりの人の多さに腰が抜けそうになりました。
いくつか暫定的な案内所が儲けてあり、観光客はそこで乗り場の番号をゲットし、それぞれ各乗り場の長蛇の列に並び、それぞれのバスに乗って出発してました。
気分はまるで工場でポテトチップスになる前のじゃがいもです。各地から取れたてのジャガイモが集められ、塩味、コンソメ、サワーオニオンとラインに入れられ、袋に詰め込まれ出荷、また袋に入れられて出荷。終わりのない流れ作業のようでした。
天気が良く、もう11月後半だというのに暑かったです。今年は紅葉が赤色に染まるのがちょっと遅い気がしました。
Tourists in Kyoto station
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I felt as if I were a potato before becoming crisps in a factory.
Fresh potatoes are collected and separate for each line such as Salt, Consomme, Sour Onion and etc.
and then they are put in a bag and shipped one after another likein an endless assembly line operation.
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The weather was beautiful.
I felt hot even though it was late November.
I thought the leaves awere slower to turn red this year than usual.
Nov. 19, 2019
Thank you for correcting! ^^
Tourists in Kyoto station
I've been to Kyoto last weekend.
GoingI went to Kyoto station to take aby the city bus, I got paralyzed at too many people.
and upon arriving I felt so claustrophobic seeing how many people there were (around me).¶
Busses were coming one after another.
I felt as if I were a potato before becoming crisps in a factory.
and then they are put in a bag and shipped one after another like an endless assembly line operation.
¶
The weather was beautiful.
I felt hot even though it was late November.
I thought the leaves are slower to turn red this year than usual.
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Nov. 18, 2019
GoingI went to Kyoto station to take aby the city bus, I got paralyzed at too many people.
and upon arriving I felt so claustrophobic seeing how many people there were (around me).¶
This was a hard sentence, but I tried to make it sound more natural
Nov. 19, 2019
Thank you for correcting and teaching this sentence "I felt so claustrophobic seeing how many people there were"
This Japanese sentence is a Japanese-specific expression, so I think it's really difficult to translate it in English. But I often use this expression so I'm happy to know this English expression ^^
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