March 11, 2025
Spain has been chosen as a tourist destination for years. Thanks to that, our country received too much money from foreign tourists. Spain is a match for its landscapes, its good climate (although depending on the area it varies).
In the first place, tourism is the first source of income for our country. It is fundamental to acknowledge that Spain base all their taxes on receiving money from visiting tourists. We have a diverse country, in which you can look for beach, or mountains, or city tourism. No longer just for the landscapes (that is evidently also) rather for gastronomy and the native people.
By contrast this huge cash receipt has his own disadvantages. As a result of this avalanche of people, it makes overcrowding in some places that never has this numbers. For instance, at Christmas time in Madrid some of the streets that are the most famous ones had become impossible to transit for Spanish inhabitants. And not to mention the small villages that receive massive numbers of tourists even when they don't have space for all of this. Due to this many inhabitants are against this type of tourism because of the masses of people.
Finally, I'd like to highlight one final key issue. Spain survives thanks to tourism. We had already seen it during COVID-19. Our country suffer a crisis because of the minimums numbers of tourism. Years later, we continue being one of the most selected destinations for the tourist.
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Spain is a matchknown for its beautiful landscapes, its good climate (although it varies depending on the area it varies).
"Known for" is a more precise and commonly used phrase when talking about a country's famous features.
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"Essential" sounds more natural than "fundamental" in this context. The verb "base" was changed to "bases" to match the subject "Spain," which is singular. Also, "receiving money from tourists" was simplified to "income from tourists" for clarity.
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Reworded to improve the flow and clarity. The phrase "native people" was changed to "culture of the local people," which sounds more respectful and appropriate when talking about communities.
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"By contrast" was changed to "However" for smoother transition. "Cash receipt" is awkward and unclear, so it was replaced with "influx of tourists." The use of "his" for "cash receipt" was a grammatical error and was corrected.
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"It makes overcrowding" is a bit unclear, so "leads to overcrowding" is more straightforward. "Never has this numbers" was corrected to "were never designed to handle such numbers" to make it grammatically correct and clearer.
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Reworded for clarity and to avoid repetition ("not to mention"). "Infrastructure to accommodate" is a more precise way of expressing the concept of space and resources.
OurThe country suffered a crisis because of the minimums numbers of tourism.significant crisis due to a sharp decline in tourist numbers
"Suffer" should be "suffered" to match past tense. "Minimum numbers of tourism" was unclear, so it was reworded to "sharp decline in tourist numbers."
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Great work! Having a lot of tourists in your country has its own advantages and disadvantages. I must say Spain is a beautiful country that is great to visit during travels.
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It may seem that I made a lot of corrections, but in reality it is easy to understand your message and I mostly corrected small mistakes and wording.
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Review connectors and basic verb tenses (being versus to be).
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"Suffer" should be "suffered" to match past tense. "Minimum numbers of tourism" was unclear, so it was reworded to "sharp decline in tourist numbers." |
Years later, we continue being one of the most selected destinations for the tourist. Years later, we continue Years later, we continue being one of the most |
No longer just for the landscapes (that is evidently also) rather for gastronomy and the native people.
"Native people" has a connotation implying native tribes such as in America or Australia. No longer just for the landscapes (that is evidently also) rather for gastronomy and the native people. No Reworded to improve the flow and clarity. The phrase "native people" was changed to "culture of the local people," which sounds more respectful and appropriate when talking about communities. |
By contrast this huge cash receipt has his own disadvantages.
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"By contrast" was changed to "However" for smoother transition. "Cash receipt" is awkward and unclear, so it was replaced with "influx of tourists." The use of "his" for "cash receipt" was a grammatical error and was corrected. |
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"It makes overcrowding" is a bit unclear, so "leads to overcrowding" is more straightforward. "Never has this numbers" was corrected to "were never designed to handle such numbers" to make it grammatically correct and clearer. |
For instance, at Christmas time in Madrid some of the streets that are the most famous ones had become impossible to transit for Spanish inhabitants. For instance, at Christmas time in Madrid, some of the streets that are the most famous For instance, at Christmas Here, it would be better to replace "Spanish inhabitants" with "local population" |
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Reworded for clarity and to avoid repetition ("not to mention"). "Infrastructure to accommodate" is a more precise way of expressing the concept of space and resources. |
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Finally, I'd like to highlight one final key issue. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
Spain survives thanks to tourism. Spain's economy only survives thanks to tourism. Or better yet "Spain's economy depends on tourism to survive" |
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“As a result” is a clearer and more natural way to express the cause-and-effect relationship between Spain's popularity as a destination and the revenue it receives. |
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