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Usually, I write about things that worry me. Of course, I feel awkward when I do it, because I don't bring such topics up in general conversation. But why not? We are strangers anyway. Besides, nobody has to correct my texts specifically - there are so many options. As for me, I like writing my thoughts about life down to take a detached view.

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Besides, nobody has to correct my texts specifically - there are so many optionsthers to correct.

The word “options” is a bit vague. If someone who had no idea what this site was read this, they might be a bit confused. Sometimes being a bit more specific can sound better

As for me, I like writing down my thoughts about life down to take a detached view.

Sentence structure sounds a bit odd here. The last bit of the sentence is a bit confusing, but I can’t think of what else it could mean.

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Usually, I write about things that worry me.

Of course, I feel awkward when I do ithat, because I don't bring up such topics up in general conversation.

But why not?

We are strangers anyway.

Besides, nobody has to correct my texts specifically - there are so many options.

As for me, I like writing my thoughts about life down to takefrom a detached viewperspective.

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Usually, I write about things that worry me.

Of course, I feel awkward when I do it, because I don't bring up such topics up in general conversation.

But why not?

We are strangers anyway.

Besides, nobody has to correct my texts specifically - there are so many options.

As for me, I like writing down my thoughts about life down to taketo view them in a detached viewmanner.

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This is a nice post have a good day :)

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Usually, I write about things that worry me.


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Of course, I feel awkward when I do it, because I don't bring such topics up in general conversation.


Of course, I feel awkward when I do it, because I don't bring up such topics up in general conversation.

Of course, I feel awkward when I do ithat, because I don't bring up such topics up in general conversation.

But why not?


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We are strangers anyway.


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Besides, nobody has to correct my texts specifically - there are so many options I like to write my thoughts about life down to take a detached view.


Besides, nobody has to correct my texts specifically - there are so many options.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Besides, nobody has to correct my texts specifically - there are so many optionsthers to correct.

The word “options” is a bit vague. If someone who had no idea what this site was read this, they might be a bit confused. Sometimes being a bit more specific can sound better

As for me, I like writing my thoughts about life down to take a detached view.


As for me, I like writing down my thoughts about life down to taketo view them in a detached viewmanner.

As for me, I like writing my thoughts about life down to takefrom a detached viewperspective.

As for me, I like writing down my thoughts about life down to take a detached view.

Sentence structure sounds a bit odd here. The last bit of the sentence is a bit confusing, but I can’t think of what else it could mean.

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