Aug. 26, 2021
ToonMe
A friend of mine upload retouched a photo on Facebook using an app called "ToonMe". You can retouch a photo into a Disney-like photo using the app. I also tried to use it and uploaded on Twitter.
This is the photo: https://twitter.com/t_namba/status/1430835543865106437
友人がTooMeというアプリを使って加工した写真をFacebookに投稿していました。そのアプリを使うとディズニーのような写真に加工できます。私もそのアプリを使ってみて、Twitterに投稿しました。
こちらがその写真です。This is the photo: https://twitter.com/t_namba/status/1430835543865106437
ToonMe
A friend of mine uploaded a retouched a photo on Facebook using an app called "ToonMe"."
Your friend completed the act of uploading, the verb "upload" should be in the past tense (uploaded).
In this instance, "retouched" acts as an adjective. So instead of "a photo", it should be "a retouched photo".
Punctuation should be inside of quotation marks. (In my examples above, I put punctuation on the outside to be more clear)
You could also say, "A friend of mine retouched a photo on Facebook using an app called "ToonMe."," if you want the action to focus on the retouching instead of the uploading.
You can retouch a photo into a Disney-like photo using the app.
I also tried to use it and uploaded the photo on Twitter.
While it can be understood that you uploaded a picture on Twitter, it is better to state what was uploaded to remove any ambiguity.
This is the photo: https://twitter.com/t_namba/status/1430835543865106437
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A friend of mine upload retouched a photo on Facebook using an app called "ToonMe". A friend of mine uploaded a retouched Your friend completed the act of uploading, the verb "upload" should be in the past tense (uploaded). In this instance, "retouched" acts as an adjective. So instead of "a photo", it should be "a retouched photo". Punctuation should be inside of quotation marks. (In my examples above, I put punctuation on the outside to be more clear) You could also say, "A friend of mine retouched a photo on Facebook using an app called "ToonMe."," if you want the action to focus on the retouching instead of the uploading. |
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You can retouch a photo into a Disney-like photo using the app. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I also tried to use it and uploaded on Twitter. I also tried to use it and uploaded the photo on Twitter. While it can be understood that you uploaded a picture on Twitter, it is better to state what was uploaded to remove any ambiguity. |
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This is the photo: https://twitter.com/t_namba/status/1430835543865106437 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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