June 11, 2024
Too Tired to Fall Asleep
Sometimes I feel too tired to sleep. It sounds weird, but I believe it happens to more sensitive people.
When I was in college, I lived in a dorm room with three roommates. I had a close relationship with my roommates; we usually chatted a lot before sleep. I appreciated the relationship, but I always found it hard to fall asleep after a long talk. At that time, I didn't know why. If I was so tired, why couldn't I fall asleep? I understand now that after a long period of activity, I need time to calm my body down.
Since I live alone, it's easier to build my own sleeping routine. I turn on the night light an hour before sleep and listen to a podcast episode I have already finished. A stable sleeping schedule creates a stable mind. It is hard to maintain, but it is worth it.
Too Tired to Fall Asleep
Sometimes, I feel too tired to sleep.
It sounds weird, but I believe it happens to more sensitive people.
When I was in college, I lived in a dorm room with three roommates.
I had a close relationship with my roommates; we usually chatted a lot before sleep.
I appreciated the relationship, but I always found it hard to fall asleep after a long talk.
At thate time, I didn't know why.
If I was so tired, why couldn't I fall asleep?
I understand now that after a long period of activity, I need time to calmfor my body calm down.
Since I live alone, it's easier to build my own sleeping routine.
I turn on themy night light an hour before sleep, and listen to a podcast episode I have already finished.
A stable sleeping schedule creates a stable mind.
It is hard to maintain, but it is so worth it.
June 12, 2024
Thank you so much!
Too Tired to Fall Asleep
Sometimes I feel too tired to sleep.
It might sounds weird, but I believe it happens to more sensitive people.
When I was in college, I lived inshared a dorm room with three roommates.
Your sentence is 100% correct! I just wanted to suggest an alternative.
I had awas close relationship with my roommates; we usually chatted a lot before sleep.
I appreciated the relationour friendship, but I always found it hard to fall asleep after a long talk.
At thate time, I didn't know why.
If I was so tired, why couldn't I fall asleep?
I understand now that after a long period of activity, I need time to calm my body downmind.
Since I live alone, it's been easier to build my own sleeping routine.
I turn on the night light an hour before sleeping and listen to a podcast episode I haved already finished.
A stable sleeping schedule creates a stable mind.
It is hard to maintain, but it is worth it.
Feedback
Absolutely. I put all devices away and out of reach before bed!
June 12, 2024
Thank you so much!
Too Tired to Fall Asleep
Sometimes I feel too tired to sleep.
It sounds weird, but I believe it happens to more sensitive people.
When I was in college, I lived in a dorm room with three roommates.
I had a close relationship with my roommates; we usually chatted a lot before sleep.
I appreciated the relationship, but I always found it hard to fall asleep after a long talk.
At that time, I didn't know why.
If I was so tired, why couldn't I fall asleep?
I understand now that after a long period of activity, I need time to calm my body down.
Since I live alone, it's easier to build my own sleeping routine.
I turn on the night light an hour before sleep and listen to a podcast episode I have already finishedlistened to before.
The original sentence makes sense but I think the corrected one sounds more natural and clear.
A stable sleeping schedule creates a stable mind.
It is hard to maintain, but it is worth it.
Feedback
Great job
June 12, 2024
Thank you so much!
Too Tired to Fall Asleep
Stylistically you do not capitalise every word.
Sometimes I feel too tired to sleep.
It sounds weird, but I believe it happens to more sensitive people.
When I was in college, I lived in a dorm room with three roommates.
I appreciated the relationship, but I always found it hard to fall asleep after a long talkdiscussion.
At that time, I didn't know why.
If I was so tired, why couldn't I fall asleep?
I understand now that after a long period of activity, I need time to calm my body down.
Since I live alone, it's easier to builddevelop my own sleeping routine.
I turn on the night light an hour before sleepbedtime and listen to a podcastn episode I have already finishedof a podcast.
A stable sleeping schedule creates a stablecalm mind.
It is hard to maintain, but it is worth it.
June 12, 2024
Thank you so much!
|
Since I live alone, it’s easier to build my own sleeping routine. |
|
It sounds weird, but I believe it happens to people who are more sensitive. |
|
At that time, I didn’t know why. |
|
If I was so tired, why couldn’t I fall asleep? |
|
Too Tired to Fall Asleep Too Tired to Fall Asleep Stylistically you do not capitalise every word. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
Sometimes I feel too tired to sleep. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! Sometimes, I feel too tired to sleep. |
|
It sounds weird, but I believe it happens to more sensitive people. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! It might sound This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
When I was in college, I lived in a dorm room with three roommates. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! When I was in college, I Your sentence is 100% correct! I just wanted to suggest an alternative. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
I had a close relationship with my roommates; we usually chatted a lot before sleep. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
I appreciated the relationship, but I always found it hard to fall asleep after a long talk. I appreciated the relationship, but I always found it hard to fall asleep after a long This sentence has been marked as perfect! I appreciated This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
At that time, I didn't know why. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! At th At th |
|
I understand now that after a long period of activity, I need time to calm my body down. I understand now that after a long period of activity, I need time to calm my body This sentence has been marked as perfect! I understand now that after a long period of activity, I need time to calm my I understand now that after a long period of activity, I need time |
|
Since I live alone, it's easier to build my own sleeping routine. Since I live alone, it's easier to This sentence has been marked as perfect! Since I live alone, it's been easier to build my own sleeping routine. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
If I was so tired, why couldn't I fall asleep? This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
I turn on the night light an hour before sleep and listen to a podcast episode I have already finished. I turn on the night light an hour before I turn on the night light an hour before sleep and listen to a podcast episode I have The original sentence makes sense but I think the corrected one sounds more natural and clear. I turn on the night light an hour before sleeping and listen to a podcast episode I ha I turn on |
|
A stable sleeping schedule creates a stable mind. A stable sleeping schedule creates a This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
It is hard to maintain, but it is worth it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! It is hard to maintain, but it is so worth it. |
You need LangCorrect Premium to access this feature.
Go Premium