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noko

July 26, 2025

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Too Tired

I did my best!
I had a practice test all day. I was very tired and very hungry, and had a great stomachache and headache because there was an energy compliment only once despite 12 hours examination time. I found it necessary to bring light meal such as rice ball, chocolate and fruits.

めっちゃ頑張った！
今日は一日中模試でめっちゃ疲れた。お腹が空きすぎて激痛に襲われた。頭痛もした。なぜなら12時間にも及ぶテストだったが、エネルギー補給が昼食の1回しかなかったからだ。おにぎりやチョコ、果物など軽食が欲しいと思った。

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araigoshi's avatar
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I hadwas doing a practice test all day.

I was very tired and very hungry, and had a greatsevere stomachache and headache because there was an energy compliment only onceonly one break for food despite 12 hours of examination time.

Repeating the very isn't needed here.

"Great" is usually only used to strengthen positive things, so I replaced it with "severe" to be more natural.

I found it was necessary to bring a light meal such as rice ball, chocolate and fruits.

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Hope you get good results! A 12 hour test sounds very daunting.

planettes's avatar
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I did my best!

I had a practice test all day.

I was very tired and very hungry, and had a greatbad stomachache and headache because there was an energy compliment only onceonly one break despite 12 hours examination time.

I found it necessary to bring a light meal such as rice balls, chocolate and fruits.

Too Tired

I did my best!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I had a practice test all day.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I hadwas doing a practice test all day.

I was very tired and very hungry, and had a great stomachache and headache because there was an energy compliment only once despite 12 hours examination time.

I was very tired and very hungry, and had a greatbad stomachache and headache because there was an energy compliment only onceonly one break despite 12 hours examination time.

I was very tired and very hungry, and had a greatsevere stomachache and headache because there was an energy compliment only onceonly one break for food despite 12 hours of examination time.

Repeating the very isn't needed here. "Great" is usually only used to strengthen positive things, so I replaced it with "severe" to be more natural.

I found it necessary to bring light meal such as rice ball, chocolate and fruits.

I found it necessary to bring a light meal such as rice balls, chocolate and fruits.

I found it was necessary to bring a light meal such as rice ball, chocolate and fruits.

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