June 15, 2020
Too Much Stuff
This post is inspired by a BBC Learning English topic. It said that people who collect too much stuff in their home suffers of stress and have a better chance to get sick. As of my experience, I feel overwhelmed as well, when I have a lot of stuff around. I have a cabinet in my room. Two shelves of it are filled with books. There are some small things like pens, wallet etc. in it too. There are two box out of shoes, that I should get rid of, I guess. Also, there are parts from my old PC, that I want to sell online. I decided to keep my old speakers with sub-woofer to listen to some music from time to time. On my desk, I usually don't have much stuff - a couple of notebooks, my journal, a pen, my smartphone, headphones, laptop and a napkin for cleaning the laptop screen. Sometimes, I put the smartphone somewhere else, but I need it on my desk when I program an app, and I prefer to test it on the phone.
Checking what I've written, I definitely should sort out stuff in my cabinet. :D
It said that people who collect too much stuff in their homes suffers of more stress and have a betgreater chance tof getting sick.
As of my experiencfor me, I feel overwhelmed as well, when I have a lot of stuff around.
There are some small things like pens, a wallet, etc.
There are two box outes of shoes, that I should get rid of, I guess.
Checking what I've written, I definitely should sort out the stuff in my cabinet.
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The battle against chaos is eternal. :D
June 16, 2020
LOL :D
As of myfor my own experience, I also feel overwhelmed as well, when I have a lot of stuff around.
There are some small things like pens, wallet, etc.
Too Much Stuff
This post is inspired by a BBC Learning English topic.
It said that people who collect too much stuff in their home suffers of from stress and have a betthigher chance tof getting sick.
“Better chance” had a more positive connotation.
I would also clarify “it,” as one can’t really say that a “topic” said something.
As ofor my experiences, I feel overwhelmed as well, when I have a lot of stuff around.
I have a cabinet in my room.
Two of its shelves of it are filled with books.
There are some small thingitems/objects like pens, wallets/a wallet, etc.
in it too.
There are two box outes of shoes, that I should get rid of, I guess.
Or “two empty shoeboxes,” depending on your meaning.
Also, there are parts from my old PC, thatwhich I want to sell online.
In this situation, “that” would not follow a comma.
I decided to keep my old speakers with sub-woofers to listen to some music from time to time.
On my desk, I usually don't have much stuff - just a couple of notebooks, my journal, a pen, my smartphone, headphones, my laptop and a napkin for cleaning the laptop screen.
Sometimes, I put the smartphone somewhere else, but I need it on my desk when I program an app, andbecause I prefer to test it on thea phone.
Checking what I've written, I definitely should sort out the stuff in my cabinet.
:D
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It said that people who collect too much stuff in their home suffers of stress and have a better chance to get sick. It said that people who collect too much stuff in their home suffer “Better chance” had a more positive connotation. I would also clarify “it,” as one can’t really say that a “topic” said something. It said that people who collect too much stuff in their homes suffer |
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There are two box out of shoes, that I should get rid of, I guess. There are two box Or “two empty shoeboxes,” depending on your meaning. There are two box |
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Also, there are parts from my old PC, that I want to sell online. Also, there are parts from my old PC, In this situation, “that” would not follow a comma. |
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I decided to keep my old speakers with sub-woofer to listen to some music from time to time. I decided to keep my old speakers with sub |
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On my desk, I usually don't have much stuff - a couple of notebooks, my journal, a pen, my smartphone, headphones, laptop and a napkin for cleaning the laptop screen. On my desk, I usually don't have much stuff - just a couple of notebooks, my journal, a pen, my smartphone, headphones, my laptop and a napkin for cleaning the laptop screen. |
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Sometimes, I put the smartphone somewhere else, but I need it on my desk when I program an app, and I prefer to test it on the phone. Sometimes, I put the smartphone somewhere else, but I need it on my desk when I program an app, |
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Checking what I've written, I definitely should sort out stuff in my cabinet. Checking what I've written, I definitely should sort out the stuff in my cabinet. Checking what I've written, I definitely should sort out the stuff in my cabinet. |
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