Oct. 30, 2020
Tomorrow's Plan
I'm going to go to the market with my friends tomorrow. The market is a fish market and especially it is famous for tuna. So, I'm looking forward to eating an assorted seafood rice bowl. However, the opening time is very early and it will take over one hour to go there by motorbike, so we should wake up at 4 AM. I'm worried about oversleeping.
The market is a fish market and it is especially it is famous for its tuna.
"its" is optional in my correction.
So, I'm looking forward to eating an assorted seafood rice bowl.
However, the opening time is very early and it will take over onean hour to go there by motorbike, so we should wake up at 4 AM.
"one hour" is okay, but "an hour" is more natural.
I'm worried about oversleeping.
Oct. 31, 2020
Thank you!
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Tomorrow's Plan |
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I'm going to go to the market with my friends tomorrow. |
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The market is a fish market and especially it is famous for tuna. The market is a fish market and it is especially "its" is optional in my correction. |
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So, I'm looking forward to eating an assorted seafood rice bowl. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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However, the opening time is very early and it will take over one hour to go there by motorbike, so we should wake up at 4 AM. However, the opening time is very early and it will take over "one hour" is okay, but "an hour" is more natural. |
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I'm worried about oversleeping. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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