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A Mystery In Winter

Around this time three years ago, our company held a party for customers at a gorgeous hotel on a Friday. After the party finished, three female coworkers and I went to a nice cafe in another gorgeous hotel.
At the entrance, a waiter came over to us and said, "Your party is five people, right?" We answered, "No, we are four." We looked back and found that no one was there around us. The waiter said sorry and took us to a table.
While we were sitting at a round table, a waitress brought water and put five glasses on the table. We said again, "We are four." The waitress was startled and said sorry, and removed the glass.
We enjoyed nice sweets and tea for a while and left the cafe. We were tired so called a taxi. When we were getting in, the driver said, "Sorry, this car cannot accommodate five people." We said again, "We are four." We turned around and found that no one was around us there. The driver stared at something in a minute and said, "Ah, ok, four people. Please get in."

We were wondering why they counted us five. Have you ever had a mysterious experience?

The next Monday, one of us said that a creepy thing happened to her after that. She is youngest and cutest girl among us. She comes to work from Saitama which is a bit far from Tokyo. After we got out from the taxi at Shinjuku in Tokyo, she got on a train to a station in Saitama.
She usually uses a bicycle between her house and the station. But on that day, she was so tired that she caught a taxi. When she got in the taxi, the taxi driver said, "Is both of you the same destination?" She froze and said nothing. The driver turned around to her and said, "What..? Where is the other girl?  When did she get out before I noticed?" She answered trembling, "I was alone from the beginning. No one was with me."
The driver stared at her eyes and said in a low voice, "It's a joke."

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A Mystery In Winter

Around this time three years ago, our company held a party for customers at a gorgeous hotel on a Friday.

After the party finished, three female coworkers and I went to a nice cafe in another gorgeous hotel.

While we were sitting at a round table, a waitress brought water and put five glasses on the table.

Have you ever had a mysterious experience?

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A Mystery In Winter

Around this time three years ago, our company held a party for customers at a gorgeous hotel on a Friday.

After the party finished, three female coworkers and I went to a nice cafe in another gorgeous hotel.

The waiter said sorry and took us to a table.

While we were sitting at a round table, a waitress brought water and put five glasses on the table.

We enjoyed nice sweets and tea for a while and left the cafe.

Have you ever had a mysterious experience?

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She usually uses a bicycle between her house and the station.


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But on that day, she was so tired that she caught a taxi.


But on that day, she was so tired that she caught a taxi instead. But on that day, she was so tired that she caught a taxi instead.

But on that day, she was so tired that she caughttook a taxi instead. But on that day, she was so tired that she took a taxi instead.

The driver stared at her eyes and said in a low voice, "It's a joke."


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Around this time three years ago, our company held a party for customers at a gorgeous hotel on a Friday.


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After the party finished, three female coworkers and I went to a nice cafe in another gorgeous hotel.


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At the entrance, a waiter came over to us and said, "Your party is five people, right?" We answered, "No, we are four." We looked back and found that no one was there around us.


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While we were sitting at a round table, a waitress brought water and put five glasses on the table.


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We said again, "We are four." The waitress was startled and said sorry, and removed the glass.


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We enjoyed nice sweets and tea for a while and left the cafe.


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We were tired so called a taxi.


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Another phrase you could say is ‘hailed a taxi.’ Which is when you wave your hand in front of them in the street.

When we were getting in, the driver said, "Sorry, this car cannot accommodate five people." We said again, "We are four." We turned around and found that no one was around us there.


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Have you ever had a mysterious experience?


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The next Monday, one of us said that a creepy thing happened to her after that.


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She comes to work from Saitama which is a bit far from Tokyo.


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After we got out from the taxi at Shinjuku in Tokyo, she got on a train to a station in Saitama.


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When she got in the taxi, the taxi driver said, "Is both of you the same destination?" She froze and said nothing.


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The driver turned around to her and said, "What..? Where is the other girl?  When did she get out before I noticed?" She answered trembling, "I was alone from the beginning. No one was with me."


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