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June 15, 2024

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I've been watching the series "Tokyo Vice" lately.

It's a story about yakuza and Journalist based on Tokyo.

I watched up until episode 5, and there were two exciting scenes in the episode.

I'm going to write it.

A yakuza member named Sato lied to his boss, the boss got angry, and he ordered Sato to cut his finger off by himself.

The scene was very intense.

The strained silence in the scene was very scary.


最近「東京VIce」と言うドラマを見ています。

それは、東京が舞台の、やくざとジャーナリストのお話です。

エピソード5まで見ました。その中に二つのハラハラするシーンがありました。

その一つを書きます。

佐藤という名前のあるやくざメンバーが上司にうそをついて、その上司が怒って、彼に指を切り落とすように命令しました。

とても強烈で緊張感のあるシーンでした。

そのシーンの緊迫した静けさがとても怖かったです。

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Tokyo Vice

I've been watching the series "Tokyo Vice" lately.

It's a story about yakuza and Ja journalist based oin Tokyo.

I watched up until episode 5, and there were two exciting scenes in the episode.

I'm going to write about it.

A yakuza member named Sato lied to his boss, the boss got angry, and he ordered Sato to cut his finger off by himselfoff his own finger.

The scene was very intense.

The strained silence in the scene was very scary.

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sachisachi

June 15, 2024

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Thank you so much for your corrections!

Tokyo Vice

I've been watching the series "Tokyo Vice" lately.

It's a story about the yakuza and Ja journalist based oin Tokyo.

I watched up untilto episode 5, and there were two exciting scenes in these episodes.

I changed it to "these episodes" to make it sound more clear.

I'm going to write itabout one of them.

A yakuza member named Sato lied to his boss, the boss got angry, and he ordered Sato to cut his finger off by himselfoff his own finger.

The scene was very intense.

The strained silence in the scene was very scary.

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I've heard of Tokyo Vice, but I've never watched it. I think I'll watch it sometime.

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sachisachi

June 15, 2024

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I'll recommend it, but it contains graphic violet scenes and. Thank you for your corrections!

Tokyo Vice

I've been watching the series "Tokyo Vice" lately.

It's a story about the yakuza and Ja journalist based on Tokyo.

I watched up untilto episode 5, and there were two exciting scenes in the episode.

I'm going to write it about it.

A yakuza member named Sato lied to his boss, the boss got angry, and he ordered Sato to cut his finger off by himselfoff his own finger.

The scene was very intense.

The strained silence in the scene was very scary.

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sachisachi

June 15, 2024

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Thank you for your corrections!

I've been watching the series "Tokyo Vice" lately.


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It's a story about yakuza and Journalist based on Tokyo.


It's a story about the yakuza and Ja journalist based on Tokyo.

It's a story about the yakuza and Ja journalist based oin Tokyo.

It's a story about yakuza and Ja journalist based oin Tokyo.

I watched up until episode 5, and there were two exciting scenes in the episode.


I watched up untilto episode 5, and there were two exciting scenes in the episode.

I watched up untilto episode 5, and there were two exciting scenes in these episodes.

I changed it to "these episodes" to make it sound more clear.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'm going to write it.


I'm going to write it about it.

I'm going to write itabout one of them.

I'm going to write about it.

The scene was very intense.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Tokyo Vice


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

A yakuza member named Sato lied to his boss, the boss got angry, and he ordered Sato to cut his finger off by himself.


A yakuza member named Sato lied to his boss, the boss got angry, and he ordered Sato to cut his finger off by himselfoff his own finger.

A yakuza member named Sato lied to his boss, the boss got angry, and he ordered Sato to cut his finger off by himselfoff his own finger.

A yakuza member named Sato lied to his boss, the boss got angry, and he ordered Sato to cut his finger off by himselfoff his own finger.

The strained silence in the scene was very scary.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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