Oct. 19, 2020
Tokyo National Museum
It was been a while since I visited Tokyo National Museum.
The museum exhibits variety of oriental arts, some of which are listed as National Treasure of Japan.
Recently, Japanese swords are getting popular among young Japanese women due to the influence of some anime game called "Touken Ranbu". In this anime series, Japanese swords turns into good-looking guys. I can't comprehend the reason why it is popular at all.
By the way, Japanese swords are cool and worthy of awe and praise.
Tokyo National Museum
It whas been a while since I visited Tokyo National Museum.
The museum exhibits a variety of oriental arts, some of which are listed as National Treasures of Japan.
Recently, Japanese swords are gettinghave become popular among young Japanese women due to the influence of some animean anime television series and video game called "Touken Ranbu".
It's both a game and a series, correct?
In this anime series, Japanese swords turns into good-looking guys.
I can't comprehend the reasonhave no idea why it is so popular at all.
This version just sounds a little more natural.
By the way, Japanese swords are cool and worthy of awe and praiserespect and admiration.
Again, this sounds a little more authentic.
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Good job and a fun topic. I'll have to check out that anime!
Oct. 31, 2020
Thank you for correcting me in detail. It is also due to the influence of "Demon Slayer (Kimetsu no yaiba)" haha
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It was been a while since I visited Tokyo National Museum. It |
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The museum exhibits variety of oriental arts, some of which are listed as National Treasure of Japan. The museum exhibits a variety of oriental arts, some of which are listed as National Treasures of Japan. |
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Recently, Japanese swords are getting popular among young Japanese women due to the influence of some anime game called "Touken Ranbu". Recently, Japanese swords It's both a game and a series, correct? |
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In this anime series, Japanese swords turns into good-looking guys. In this anime series, Japanese swords turn |
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I can't comprehend the reason why it is popular at all. I This version just sounds a little more natural. |
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By the way, Japanese swords are cool and worthy of awe and praise. By the way, Japanese swords are cool and worthy of Again, this sounds a little more authentic. |
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