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Tokyo comic con
I went to Tokyo comic con on Sunday .My friends and I took picture with casts of Back to the Future and DeLorean. Doc was very cool and Biff was so nice guy. I was very excited! And we took picture with Nicholas Hoult too. We requested him V8 sign of MAD MAX.🤭It was amazing day!
日曜日に東京コミコンにいってきました。友達と一緒にバックトゥーザ・フューチャーの出演者たちとデロリアンと写真を撮ってきました！ドクはめちゃくちゃカッコよくてビフはイケオジでした！すごく楽しかったです！それからニコラス・ホルトとも写真を撮りました。MAD MAXのV8ポーズをお願いしました🤭素晴らしい1日になりました！
Tokyo comic con
I went to Tokyo comic con on Sunday .
My friends and I took picture with the casts of Back to the Future and DeLorean.
Doc was very cool and Biff was soa very nice guy.
Can also be written as "and Biff was very nice".
I was very excited!
And we took pictures with Nicholas Hoult too.
Or, if there was only one picture: "We took a picture with Nicholas Hoult too."
We requested him to do the V8 sign ofrom MAD MAX.🤭
"We asked him to do" is also correct and sounds less formal (more appropriate for this type of post).
It was an amazing day!
Article needed, "an" instead of "a" because "amazing" starts with a "A" vowel sound.
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Sounds very fun! Good write-up 😁
Tokyo cComic cCon
capitals since it is a specific event
I went to Tokyo cComic cCon on Sunday .
My friends and I took picture with the casts of Back to the Future and the DeLorean from the movie.
The cast means all the actors for the movie. If you say "casts of Back to the Future and DeLorean," it sounds like you are talking about the actors from two movies.
Doc was very cool and Biff was souch a nice guy.
"Biff was so nice," but "Biff was such a nice guy." So sounds better to me before an adjective and nothing else. Hard to explain.
We requested him to give the V8 sign ofrom MAD MAX.🤭
It was an amazing day!
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It sounds like a lot of fun! I wonder if Biff sang the funny song he has about the fan questions from the movie.
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My friends and I took picture with casts of Back to the Future and DeLorean. My friends and I took picture with the cast The cast means all the actors for the movie. If you say "casts of Back to the Future and DeLorean," it sounds like you are talking about the actors from two movies. My friends and I took picture with the casts of Back to the Future and DeLorean. |
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I was very excited! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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And we took picture with Nicholas Hoult too. And we took pictures with Nicholas Hoult too. Or, if there was only one picture: "We took a picture with Nicholas Hoult too." |
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We requested him V8 sign of MAD MAX.🤭 We requested him to give the V8 sign We requested him to do the V8 sign "We asked him to do" is also correct and sounds less formal (more appropriate for this type of post). |
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It was amazing day! It was an amazing day! It was an amazing day! Article needed, "an" instead of "a" because "amazing" starts with a "A" vowel sound. |
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