Last weekend, I attended a simulation ofor the TOEIC speaking and writing test held by themy cram school.

I scored 120 ofin speaking and 160 ofin writing, both out of 200.

Writing's scoreMy score for writing was acceptable yet there's a lot of space tofor progress.

You can also say 'room for improvement'

But my speaking's score was far from satisfactory, not even close because this. My score didn't meet the minimum to apply tofor the position that I wanted.

The qualifications for candidates includinge a score above 140 for both of the tests.

GI guess I'll have to spend more time on speaking English, and try to be prepared as soon as possible; or not to for the next test; not even mentioning the others phases after resume, I'llthe initial resume screening, I'd have failed to pass just the first requirement from the companys.

Last weekend, I attended a simulation of the TOEIC speaking and writing test held by thea cram school.

Or if you only go to this cram school "my cram school".

I scored 120 of(in / for) speaking and 160 of(in / for) writing, both out of 200.

"in" is most natural

WThe writing's score was acceptable, yet there's a lot of space to progress.

Or more natural "to grow"

But the speaking's score was far from satisfactory, not even close because this score didn't meet the minimum to apply to the position that I want.

The qualifications for candidates includinge a score above 140 for both of the tests.

Guess I'll have to spend more time on speaking English, and try to beget prepared as soon as possible; or not to mention the others phases after the resume, I'll (stage). I failed to pass just the first requirement from (the companys / these companies).

Last weekend, I attended a simulation of the TOEIC speaking and writing test held by the cram school.

I scored 120 ofn speaking and 160 ofn writing, both out of 200.

WMy writing's score was acceptable, yet there's a lot of space toroom for progress.

But my speaking's score was far from satisfactory, not even close because this score didn't meet the minimum to apply to the position that I want.

Guess I'll have to spend more time on speaking English, and try to be prepared as soon as possible; or not to mention others phases afterI have to resume,. I'llve failed to pass just the first requirement fromof the companys.