March 28, 2023
Toeic 1-10
I'd like to speak English naturally, and not like a textbook, so please correct me as accurately as possible so that I can speak like a native!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
Toeic
1-10
Anyway
Let’s try, anyway.
Following
以下の問いに答えて。
Answer the following questions.
Refer
知り合いを紹介すると1品限定50％引き。
You can get a 50% discount on one item only when you refer someone you know to me!
Available
これはまだ手に入りますか？
Is this still available?
Department
どこの売り場にそれはありますか？
On which departments is it displayed?
Conference
これはカンファレンスとコンベンションどっち？
Is this a conference or a convention?
According to
厚生労働省によると、
According to the Ministry of Health, Labor and Welfare,
Likely
残念ながらおそらくその日には間に合わないかと思います。
I’m afraid we probably won't be able to make it on that date.
Offer
君にこの仕事をオファーしたい。
I would like to offer you this job.
Equipment
今1番欲しい設備はなに？
What equipment do you want most now?
Toeic 1-10
I'd like to speak English naturally, and not like a textbook, so please correct me as accurately as possible so that I can speak like a native!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
Toeic
1-10
Anyway
Let’s try, anyway.
Following
Answer the following questions.
Refer
You can get a 50% discount on one item only when you refer someone you know to me!
Available
Is this still available?
Department
OIn which departments is it displayed?
Conference
Is this a conference or a convention?
According to
According to the Ministry of Health, Labor and Welfare,
Likely
I’m afraid we probably won't be able to make it on that date.
Offer
I would like to offer you this job.
Equipment
What equipment do you want most now?
Feedback
上手に書けています！
March 31, 2023
You can get a 50% discount on one item only when you refer someone you know to me!
なぜここでのcanは不自然なんでしょうか？
March 31, 2023
なぜここでのcanは不自然なんでしょうか？
Because the "only when you refer ..." part makes it sound unnatural to me. It's okay but there's no reason for it.
April 3, 2023
Because the "only when you refer ..." part makes it sound unnatural to me. It's okay but there's no reason for it.
これでどうでしょうか？
You can get a 50% discount on one item if you refer someone!
April 3, 2023
これでどうでしょうか？ You can get a 50% discount on one item if you refer someone!
はい！完璧です！
Let’s try, anyway.
Answer the following questions.
You can get a 50% discount on one item only whenif you refer someone you know to me!
Is this still available?
On wWhich departments is ithat displayed in?
Is this a conference or a convention?
According to the Ministry of Health, Labor and Welfare,
I’m afraid we probably won't be able to make it on that date.
I would like to offer you this job.
What equipment do you want most (right) now?
March 29, 2023
You can get a 50% discount on one item only whenif you refer someone you know to me!
Does "you know" alone mean you know acquaintance?
March 29, 2023
Does "you know" alone mean you know acquaintance?
I don't know why I cut "someone." My bad! It should've been "You can get a 50% discount on one item if you refer someone." The "you know" should be cut here since it is inferred that you already know the person being referred.
March 31, 2023
I don't know why I cut "someone." My bad! It should've been "You can get a 50% discount on one item if you refer someone." The "you know" should be cut here since it is inferred that you already know the person being referred.
I see!! I got it!! Thank you so much!!🙇♂️
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知り合いを紹介すると1品限定50％引き。 |
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これはまだ手に入りますか？ |
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どこの売り場にそれはありますか？ |
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これはカンファレンスとコンベンションどっち？ |
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