Jan. 3, 2021
TOEFL-WRITING
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment-doing things they like to do-rather than doing things they should do.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I disagree this statement which is people spend time on personal enjoyment-doing things rather than they should do. The main reasons is the world are changing.
At the first is what is the main that people should do, i roughly divide it into work or study.
During the world to be changed, there are more facilities for people to enjoy than the previous world. It is normal for people spend more time on enjoyment. Because modern people have this condition. People in the past didn't have this facilities, even though they want to spend too much time to enjoy it, they can't do it so that they can only go to work or study.However, the modern people have much choice.Once people have more choice, their energy and time distribution is also different.
The development of the word not only bring more facilities to enjoy for people, but also bring more pressure. If people just added pressure, but ignoring the enjoyment. this situation will cause low efficiency, because people need to rest. The body will bad if work and rest are not balance. Maybe the task only need to ten minutes can be done, but now, it will take half an hour. However, if people take a enough enjoy, the inefficiency will not happen.
Besides, people in the past they have much time to sleep generally. Because they lacked way to enjoy. According to scientific research，people's average sleep time gradually decrease. But it is suit social development. And the less sleep time is better for the human body now. In that case, people enjoy more time expect same work or study time. these enjoyment time will not delay people doing what they should do.
so i object this statement. Because this is in line with the development of society.
TOEFL-WRITING
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment-doing things they like to do-rather than doing things they should do.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
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sSo iI object this statement.
Bbecause this is in line with the development of society.
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment-doing things they like to do-rather than doing things they should do. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I disagree this statement which is people spend time on personal enjoyment-doing things rather than they should do. I disagree |
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The main reasons is the world are changing. The main reason singular |
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At the first is what is the main that people should do, i roughly divide it into work or study.
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During the world to be changed, there are more facilities for people to enjoy than the previous world.
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It is normal for people spend more time on enjoyment. It is normal for people spend more time or 'on things they enjoy' |
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Because modern people have this condition.
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People in the past didn't have this facilities, even though they want to spend too much time to enjoy it, they can't do it so that they can only go to work or study.However, the modern people have much choice.Once people have more choice, their energy and time distribution is also different. People in the past didn't have th |
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The development of the word not only bring more facilities to enjoy for people, but also bring more pressure. The development of the world not only bring more facilities |
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If people just added pressure, but ignoring the enjoyment. If people just added pressure, but ignor |
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this situation will cause low efficiency, because people need to rest. this situation w |
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The body will bad if work and rest are not balance. The body will perform badly if work and rest are not balanced. |
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Maybe the task only need to ten minutes can be done, but now, it will take half an hour. Maybe |
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However, if people take a enough enjoy, the inefficiency will not happen. However, if people take |
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Besides, people in the past they have much time to sleep generally. Besides, people in the past |
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Because they lacked way to enjoy.
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According to scientific research，people's average sleep time gradually decrease. According to scientific research |
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But it is suit social development. But |
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And the less sleep time is better for the human body now.
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In that case, people enjoy more time expect same work or study time. In that case, people |
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these enjoyment time will not delay people doing what they should do.
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so i object this statement.
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Because this is in line with the development of society.
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