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Whether or not AI technology is harmful to society or a powerful tool that will improve the lives of people is a complex issue. While I understand Megan's perspective I disagree because I believe that new innovative technologies may help humanity in varied platforms. For example, it provides some opportunities in health, engineering, and some industries. Additionally, I watched a documentary about a group of bachelor students who invented an electronic chip, connected to a device, which may be inserted into the body so it can measure the insulin in the blood. When the chip feels that there is a high dose of insulin it sends alerts to the device. Consequently, the doctors will be able to observe their patients optimally. However, I have to admit that many AI technologies may do jobs instead of people but they will provide plenty of facilities to them. Therefore, AI technology may be a powerful and lifesaver tool.


Whether or not AI technology is harmful to society or a powerful tool that will improve the lives of people is a complex issue. While I understand Megan's perspective I disagree because I believe that new innovative technologies may help humanity in varied platforms. For example, it provides some opportunities in health, engineering, and some industries. Additionally, I watched a documentary about a group of bachelor students who invented an electronic chip, connected to a device, which may be inserted into the body so it can measure the insulin in the blood. When the chip feels that there is a high dose of insulin it sends alerts to the device. Consequently, the doctors will be able to observe their patients optimally. However, I have to admit that many AI technologies may do jobs instead of people but they will provide plenty of facilities to them. Therefore, AI technology may be a powerful and lifesaver tool.

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Not sure what this title is meant to be.

While I understand Megan's perspective, I disagree because I believe that new innovative technologies may help humanity in varied platforma number of areas.

varied platforms is rather unnatural language here.

Additionally, I watched a documentary about a group of bachelor's students who invented an electronic chip, connected to a device, which may be inserted into the body so it can measure the insulin in the blood.

bachelor students -> students who are single men
bachelor's students -> students undertaking a bachelor's degree

The context means most people will understand what you mean, but since this is a language correction site I thought I'd point it out.

Therefore, AI technology may be a powerful and lifesavering tool.

lifesaver is an a noun, lifesaving is used in this adjective position here

When the chip feels that there is a high dose of insulin it sends alerts to the device.


Consequently, the doctors will be able to observe their patients optimally.


However, I have to admit that many AI technologies may do jobs instead of people but they will provide plenty of facilities to them.


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Not sure what this title is meant to be.

Whether or not AI technology is harmful to society or a powerful tool that will improve the lives of people is a complex issue.


While I understand Megan's perspective I disagree because I believe that new innovative technologies may help humanity in varied platforms.


While I understand Megan's perspective, I disagree because I believe that new innovative technologies may help humanity in varied platforma number of areas.

varied platforms is rather unnatural language here.

For example, it provides some opportunities in health, engineering, and some industries.


Additionally, I watched a documentary about a group of bachelor students who invented an electronic chip, connected to a device, which may be inserted into the body so it can measure the insulin in the blood.


Additionally, I watched a documentary about a group of bachelor's students who invented an electronic chip, connected to a device, which may be inserted into the body so it can measure the insulin in the blood.

bachelor students -> students who are single men bachelor's students -> students undertaking a bachelor's degree The context means most people will understand what you mean, but since this is a language correction site I thought I'd point it out.

Therefore, AI technology may be a powerful and lifesaver tool.


Therefore, AI technology may be a powerful and lifesavering tool.

lifesaver is an a noun, lifesaving is used in this adjective position here

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