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Sometimes, I can't understand todays world. Eveybody is hopeless for future. But we should change and think differently. Maybe air pollution, water pollution, wars, crimes are important and difficult problems, I understand that. But you know, TOUGH SHIT. We are responsible for what happening in these days. We can change every situtation. Our dream is more safe and clean world than todays world. But for that we should work, work, work... We should find some ways for safety systems, we should find a way for clean nature, we should find a way for tomorrows problems. These days like a torment for us. If you want to give a beatdown to these problems, please have faith and work like unstoppable. It can solve every problem, everytime.
Sometimes, I can't understand today's world.
Everybody is hopeless forabout the future.
But we should still change and think differently.
Maybe air pollution,Air and water pollution, wars, and crimes rate are important and difficult problems, I understand that.
Crime rate is a bit more appropriate here.
We are responsible for what's happening in these days.
"These days" is a bit vague and not really a thing. It's grammatical, but a set phrase works better. Like "in this day and age".
We can changsolve every situtationproblem stated before.
You don't really "change" a problem. You solve it. If you still want to keep the verb "change", you can say" Every situation can be changed" and maybe add "and so can the world's problems" after it to make it extra smooth.
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Wow, very inspirational. Let's work towards a new and better tomorrow together!
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Today's World |
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Our dream is more safe and clean world than todays world.
Who is "we"? Using "our" here is a bit vague. |
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But for that we should work, work, work... |
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We should find some ways for safety systems, we should find a way for clean nature, we should find a way for tomorrows problems. We should |
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These days like a torment for us.
Comes off as a bit dramatic, but fine otherwise. |
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If you want to give a beatdown to these problems, please have faith and work like unstoppable. If you want to |
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It can solve every problem, everytime.
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Sometimes, I can't understand todays world. Sometimes, I can't understand today's world. |
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Eveybody is hopeless for future. Everybody is hopeless |
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But we should change and think differently. But we should still change and think differently. |
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Maybe air pollution, water pollution, wars, crimes are important and difficult problems, I understand that.
Crime rate is a bit more appropriate here. |
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But you know, TOUGH SHIT. |
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We are responsible for what happening in these days. We are responsible for what's happening "These days" is a bit vague and not really a thing. It's grammatical, but a set phrase works better. Like "in this day and age". |
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We can change every situtation. We can You don't really "change" a problem. You solve it. If you still want to keep the verb "change", you can say" Every situation can be changed" and maybe add "and so can the world's problems" after it to make it extra smooth. |
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