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Nov. 2, 2020

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Todays Walk

I went for an hour-long walk because staying indoors all the time is not good for you, but today I'm going to write in my diary a detailed account of what happened during my walk.
I went out of the house around 1:30 pm and it was 21 degrees today and compared to yesterday, it was very warm and I didn't need to wear heavy clothes.
As I was walking to the park, I saw some local junior high school students heading our way, and I thought they were leaving school too early, and at first I wondered if they had skipped school, but now that I think about it, it's not strange that junior high school students leave school at this time of the day, because they have final exams at the end of November.
When I arrived at the park, there were some local college students enjoying their baseball games on the baseball field and a few elderly people running along the park path.
I found a pull-up bar set up near the park equipment, so I did some muscle training for a while, but it didn't last long as I hadn't done any muscle training at all lately.
I walked down the park path listening to music with my Bluetooth Earphone and as I was walking I found a vending machine and just as I was thirsty so I bought a 120 yen can of Coke for 200 yen that I had in my pants pocket and drank the Coke while sitting on the bench.
When I finished my Coke, I looked at my watch and saw that it was past 3:00 and it was time for my mother to get off work and come home, so I started to head home.



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家にずっと引きこもっていると、体に良くないので、1時間ほどの散歩をしたのだが、今日は散歩中に起きた出来事を事細かく日記に書いていこうと思う。
午後1時半頃に家から外出したのだが、今日の気温は21度で昨日と比べると、とても暖かく厚着をする必要がなかった。
公園に向かって歩いている途中に地元の中学生がこちらにむかっているのを見たのだが、下校の時間が早すぎると思い、最初に私は彼らは学校をサボって抜け出してきたのかと思ったが、今よく考えてみれば、11月の下旬には期末テストがあって、この時間に中学生が下校しているのは不自然ではない。
公園に着くと、野球場には地元の大学生たちが野球を楽しんでいて、公園の道にはお年を召された方が何人か走っていた。
私は公園の道具の近くに設置されている懸垂棒を見つけたので、しばらく筋肉トレーニングをしたのだが、最近全く筋トレをしていなかったため、長くは続かなかった。
私は公園の道をBluetoothEarphoneを使って音楽を聴きながら歩いて、歩いてる途中に自動販売機を見つけて、ちょうど喉が渇いていたので、ズボンのポケットに入っていた200円で120円のカンのコーラを買って、ベンチに座りながらコーラを飲んだ。
コーラを飲み終えた頃に、腕時計を見てみると3時を過ぎていて、母親も仕事が終わって家に帰ってくる時間なので、家に向かって帰り始めた。

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Today's Walk

I went for an hour-long walk because staying indoors all the time is not good for you, but today I'm going to write in my diary a detailed account of what happened during my walk.

I went out of the house around 1:30 pm and it was 21 degrees today and compared to yesterday, it was very warm and I didn't need to wear heavy clothes.

As I was walking to the park, I saw some local junior high school students heading our way, and I thought they were leaving school too early, and at first I wondered if they had skipped school, but now that I think about it, it's not strange that junior high school students leave school at this time of the day, because they have final exams at the end of November.

When I arrived at the park, there were some local college students enjoying their baseball games on the baseball field and a few elderly people running along the park's pathway.

I found a pull-up bar set up near the park equipment, so I did some muscle training for a while, but it didn't last long as I hadn't done any muscle training at all lately.

I walked down the park's pathway listening to music with my Bluetooth Earphone and as I was walking I found a vending machine and just as since I was thirsty so I bought a 120 yen can of Coke for 200 yen that I had in my pants pocket and drank the Coke while sitting on the bench.

When I finished my Coke, I looked at my watch and saw that it was past 3:00 and it was time for my mother to get off work and come home, so I started to head home.

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Nicely written, well done!

Todays Walk


Today's Walk

I went for an hour-long walk because staying indoors all the time is not good for you, but today I'm going to write in my diary a detailed account of what happened during my walk.


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I went out of the house around 1:30 pm and it was 21 degrees today and compared to yesterday, it was very warm and I didn't need to wear heavy clothes.


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As I was walking to the park, I saw some local junior high school students heading our way, and I thought they were leaving school too early, and at first I wondered if they had skipped school, but now that I think about it, it's not strange that junior high school students leave school at this time of the day, because they have final exams at the end of November.


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When I arrived at the park, there were some local college students enjoying their baseball games on the baseball field and a few elderly people running along the park path.


When I arrived at the park, there were some local college students enjoying their baseball games on the baseball field and a few elderly people running along the park's pathway.

I found a pull-up bar set up near the park equipment, so I did some muscle training for a while, but it didn't last long as I hadn't done any muscle training at all lately.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I walked down the park path listening to music with my Bluetooth Earphone and as I was walking I found a vending machine and just as I was thirsty so I bought a 120 yen can of Coke for 200 yen that I had in my pants pocket and drank the Coke while sitting on the bench.


I walked down the park's pathway listening to music with my Bluetooth Earphone and as I was walking I found a vending machine and just as since I was thirsty so I bought a 120 yen can of Coke for 200 yen that I had in my pants pocket and drank the Coke while sitting on the bench.

When I finished my Coke, I looked at my watch and saw that it was past 3:00 and it was time for my mother to get off work and come home, so I started to head home.


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