April 18, 2022
Today's journal
I went to the book store today. I started to study Chineses, so I wanted to buy a small vocabulary book.
I tried to make a bread today. I put the yeast in the flour, mixed and waited. But it didn't finish it's fermentation. I found the recipe on internet and it said I needed just a hour to ferment. But had to wait until night. I couldn't help decide to make it tomorrow. I thought my yeast was a little different. It was not a normal dry yeast. It was something different. It takes long time usually. I had to remember that but I couldn't. It's my fault. I wanted to make Turkey style bread. And using it, I planed to make the Gyros, the Greek sandwich. I had a plan. I prepared the pork , tomatoes and some green vegetables. I also had an yogurt for sauce. But today, in a shame, it's impossible. It's too late now. Tomorrow is the day.
My girl friend poured her flowerpot over. It was on the window frame and when she opened the window, it hit the pot and it fell. It didn't broke but the soil spilled out. I could settle it. I brushed the soil and scooped it up to the pot. Then I wiped the floor with a rag. I poured a cup of water over it because the plant seemed to lose its vitality.
There was chicken breasts in the refrigerator. It was not frozen. It was in the fridge not the freezer. I had been worrying it had gone bad. So I made the chicken curry with it. There was a potato in cabinet. I hid it because it has not to be exposed by sun. I found it and used it to cook.
Today's journal
I went to the book store today.
I tried to make a bread today.
I put the yeast in the flour, mixed and waited.
I found the recipe on internet and it said I needed just a hour to ferment.
But had to wait until night (time).
I couldn't help decidedo anything but wait to make it tomorrow.
I thought ink my yeast was a little different.
It was not a normal dry yeast.
It was something different.
It usually takes a long time usually.
'Usually' sounds more natural in this spot.
I had toshould have remembered that but I couldidn't.
It's my fault.
I wanted to make Turkey style bread.
And using it, I planedI planned to use it to make the Gyros, the Greek sandwich.
I had a plan.
I prepared the pork , tomatoes and some green vegetables.
I also had an yogurt for sauce.
But today, in a shame, it's impossible, which is a shame.
It's too late now.
Tomorrow is the day.
My girl friend pourtipped her flowerpot over.
It didn't brokeeak but the soil spilled out.
I could settle it.
I'm not sure what this means.
I brushed up the soil and scooped it up to the pot.
Then I wiped the floor with a rag.
I poured a cup of water over it because the plant seemed to lose its vitality.
There wasere chicken breasts in the refrigerator.
It was not frozen.
It was in the fridge not the freezer.
I had been worrying it had gone bad.
So I made the chicken curry with it.
There was a potato in the cabinet.
I hid it because it has not tocannot be exposed byto the sun.
I found it and used it to cook.
Feedback
Great work! :)
April 19, 2022
Thank you ^^
Today's journal
I went to the book store today.
I started to study Chineses, so I wanted to buy a small vocabulary book.
I tried to make a bread today.
I put the yeast in the flour, mixed and waited.
But it didn't finish it's fermentation.
I found the recipe on internet and it said I needed just an hour for the bread to ferment.
"an" is used here because the H in hour is silent so hour begins with a vowel sound even though it does not begin with a vowel letter
But I had to wait until night.
I couldn't help decided to make it tomorrow.
I thought my yeast was a little different.
It was not a normal dry yeast.
It was something different.
It takes long time usually.
I had to remember that but I couldn't.forgot about that
This is just a more natural way of saying this
It' was my fault.
It's is a short version of "it is" which is present tense, but for this sentence you needed past tense
I wanted to make Turkey style bread.
And using it, I planed to make the Gyros, the Greek sandwich.
I had a plan.
I prepared the pork , tomatoes and some green vegetables.
I also had an yogurt for sauce.
But today, in a shameunfortunatley, it' was impossible.
It's too late now.
Tomorrow is the day.
My girl friend pourknocked her flowerpot over.
"poured" suggests she did it on purpose
It didn't brokeeak but the soil spilled out.
I could settle it.
Not quite sure what you mean by this
I brushed the soil and scooped it up to the pot.
Then I wiped the floor with a rag.
I poured a cup of water over it because the plant seemed to have loset its vitality.
There was chicken breasts in the refrigerator.
ItThey was not frozen.
There is more than one chicken breast so you use the plural "they" rather that "it" which is used for only one
It wasThey were in the fridge not the freezer.
I had been worrying ithey had gone bad.
So I made the chicken curry with ithem.
There was a potato in cabinet.
I hid it because it has to not to be exposed byto the sun.
I found it and used it to cook.
Feedback
Very good writing!
Only a few small errors such as pronouns and inconsistent tenses
I am sorry you did not get to make your bread and I hope your girlfriend's flower is ok :)
April 18, 2022
Thank you. All is well. Don't worry.
And you corrected my journal very fast. Thank you.
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