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Sept. 11, 2023

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Today’s episode

I experienced a precious event today.
I work in the hospital as a resident and train in a surgical department now.
Today, I joined in a surgery for the first time in one year. At first I felt a little bit nervous but I could remember gradually how delight a surgery is. In addition, my boss let me do an invasive procedure. This was rare. When all the things finished, I was fully satisfied.
I will also take part in a surgery as an assistant tomorrow. I’m looking forward to it.

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I work in the hospital as a resident and now I am training in a surgical department now.

Today, I joinedparticipated/took part in a surgery for the first time in onea year.

At first I felt a little bit nervous, but I could remember graduallygradually remembered how delight aful surgery is.

In addition, my boss let me do an invasive procedure.

This wais rare.

When all the everything was finished, I was fully satisfied.

I will also take part in a surgery as an assistant tomorrow.

I’m looking forward to it.

Today’s eEpisode

I work in theat a hospital as a resident and I'm currently training in athe surgical department now.

"the" because there's only one surgical department in a hospital (just like how there's only one lab department, one ED department, etc.)

Today, I joined in on a surgery for the first time in one year.

or: I joined in on a surgery for the first time today after one year.

At first I felt a little bit nervous but I could remember gradually, gradually, I remembered how delight aful doing surgery is.

When all the everything was finished, I was fully satisfied.

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Congratulations on the surgery~!

Today’s episode


Today’s eEpisode

I experienced a precious event today.


I work in the hospital as a resident and train in a surgical department now.


I work in theat a hospital as a resident and I'm currently training in athe surgical department now.

"the" because there's only one surgical department in a hospital (just like how there's only one lab department, one ED department, etc.)

I work in the hospital as a resident and now I am training in a surgical department now.

Today, I joined in a surgery for the first time in one year.


Today, I joined in on a surgery for the first time in one year.

or: I joined in on a surgery for the first time today after one year.

Today, I joinedparticipated/took part in a surgery for the first time in onea year.

At first I felt a little bit nervous but I could remember gradually how delight a surgery is.


At first I felt a little bit nervous but I could remember gradually, gradually, I remembered how delight aful doing surgery is.

At first I felt a little bit nervous, but I could remember graduallygradually remembered how delight aful surgery is.

In addition, my boss let me do an invasive procedure.


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This was rare.


This wais rare.

When all the things finished, I was fully satisfied.


When all the everything was finished, I was fully satisfied.

When all the everything was finished, I was fully satisfied.

I will also take part in a surgery as an assistant tomorrow.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I’m looking forward to it.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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