Dec. 7, 2021
Today’s disaster
Japanese train usually comes on time. It is strictly along with a time table. Even 5 minutes delay is picked up as a big problem.
But sometime accidents happen and trains stop. It makes a lot of commuters confused.
When I went to a station in this morning, it was filled with people because trains stopped due to an big accident. I can’t have gone to near the station’s entrance.
Once I saw the scene, I decided to wait in the Starbucks close to the station until it runs usual time table.
After one and half hours, the entry restriction to the platform was lifted and I went there to take the train.
But trains was also filled with people and I wasn’t able to take the train…after a hour since I got the train, it haven’t gotten to my destination, usually it takes 16 minutes.
Finally I gave up to get to my office in the morning and decided to have a half day off. Oh my god, I throw away Starbuck’s one more coffee ticket!
Japanese trains usually comes on time.
Trains should be plural.
It isThey strictly along withfollow a time table.
Even a 5 minutes delay is picked upseen as a big problem.
But sometimes accidents happen and trains stop.
When I went to athe station in this morning, it was filled with people because the trains stopped due to an big accident.
Use "an" when the next word starts with a vowel sound.
I can’t have gone toouldn't get near the station’s entrance.
Once I saw the scene, I decided to wait in the Starbucks close to the station until it runsthe trains were on their usual time table.
Reworded the ending to sound more natural to me.
After one and a half hours, the entry restriction to the platform was lifted, and I went there to take the train.
Added a comma since this is a compound sentence.
But the trains was alsoere filled with people, and I wasn’t able to take the train…after a. An hour sinceafter I got on the train, it haven’t gotten to my destination,dn't reached my destination even though it usually it takes 16 minutes.
"Hour" starts with a vowel sound even though "h" is a consonant, so it should be " an hour."
Finally, I gave up to getting to my office in the morning and decided to have a half day off.
A comma should follow "finally" when it is used at the beginning of a sentence in this way.
Oh my god, I throw away Starbuck’s one more coffee ticket!
Not sure what this sentence means but "throw" should be "threw."
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Today’s disaster |
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Japanese train usually comes on time. Japanese trains usually come Trains should be plural. |
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It is strictly along with a time table.
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Even 5 minutes delay is picked up as a big problem. Even a 5 minute |
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But sometime accidents happen and trains stop. But sometimes accidents happen and trains stop. |
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It makes a lot of commuters confused. |
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When I went to a station in this morning, it was filled with people because trains stopped due to an big accident. When I went to Use "an" when the next word starts with a vowel sound. |
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I can’t have gone to near the station’s entrance. I c |
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Once I saw the scene, I decided to wait in the Starbucks close to the station until it runs usual time table. Once I saw the scene, I decided to wait in the Starbucks close to the station until Reworded the ending to sound more natural to me. |
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After one and half hours, the entry restriction to the platform was lifted and I went there to take the train. After one and a half hours, the entry restriction to the platform was lifted, and I went there to take the train. Added a comma since this is a compound sentence. |
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But trains was also filled with people and I wasn’t able to take the train…after a hour since I got the train, it haven’t gotten to my destination, usually it takes 16 minutes. But the trains w "Hour" starts with a vowel sound even though "h" is a consonant, so it should be " an hour." |
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Finally I gave up to get to my office in the morning and decided to have a half day off. Finally, I gave up A comma should follow "finally" when it is used at the beginning of a sentence in this way. |
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Oh my god, I throw away Starbuck’s one more coffee ticket!
Not sure what this sentence means but "throw" should be "threw." |
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