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LeahLeah

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Today’s dinner

It’s hassle to cook for dinner today.
I remembered that I had a frozen Gyoza in the freezer.

So I’ll have Gyoza for dinner tonight.

It’s easy to cook it.
It just put it on a pan.

Today’s dinner is Gyoza, a tomato and cucumber salad, miso soup with egg,onion and seaweed(wakame).


今日は夕食を作るのが面倒だ。冷凍庫に冷凍餃子があることを思い出した。

今晩の夕食は餃子を食べます。

調理も簡単。フライパンに載せるだけ。

今日の夕食は餃子、トマトとキュウリのサラダ、卵と玉ねぎとワカメの入った味噌汁です。

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Today’s dDinner

It’s would be hassle to cook for dinner today.

I remembered that I had a frozen Gyoza in the freezer.

S, so I’ll have Gyoza for dinner tonight.

It’s easy to cook it.

It just put it on a pan.

Today’s dinner is Gyoza, a tomato and cucumber salad, miso soup with egg, onion, and seaweed (wakame).

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LeahLeah

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Thank you so much 😊

Today’s dDinner

Proper capitalization with your title.

It’s a hassle to cook for dinner today.

Add “a” before “hassle” and remove “for” for natural phrasing.

I remembered that I had a frozen Gyoza in the freezer.

No “a” before “frozen gyoza” when speaking generally.

ItYou just put it othem in a pan.

Change subject to “you” for instruction style
Plural “them” for gyoza.

Today’s dinner is Gyoza, a tomato and cucumber salad, miso soup with egg, onion, and seaweed (wakame).

Add “and” before “miso soup”
Fix spacing and punctuation

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Wow, I got hungry reading it. Good job, keep writing! 🤍

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LeahLeah

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Thank you for correcting me.😊

It’s a hassle to cook fortoday’s dinner today.

A bit more natural

I remembered that I had a frozen Gyoza in the freezer.

“a” makes it seems like you had only one piece of gyoza (一個), but you probably meant that you had a whole pack.

So I’ll have Gyoza for dinner tonight.

It’s easy to cook it.

ItYou can just put it on a pan.

Today’s dinner is Gyoza, a tomato and cucumber salad, miso soup with egg, onion and seaweed (wakame).

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This is good writing. Very easy to understand your point.
よろしくお願いします

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LeahLeah

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Thank you for correcting me.😊
こちらこそよろしくお願いします😃

Today’s dinner

It’s a hassle to cook for dinner today.

It’s easy to cook it.

It just put it on a pan.

Today’s dinner is Gyoza, a tomato and cucumber salad, and miso soup with egg,onion and seaweed(wakame).

Usually we put "and" before the last item. Since "miso soup with egg,onion and seaweed(wakame)" is considered as one item, we will put an "and" before it.

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I like Gyoza too! We often can add a little extra for a Gyoza addon to our meal. . ...And you just made me hungry lol.

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LeahLeah

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The Gyoza is nutritious, if we eat too much it, we might gain weight.😱

Today’s dinner


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Today’s dDinner

Proper capitalization with your title.

Today’s dDinner

It’s hassle to cook for dinner today.


It’s a hassle to cook for dinner today.

It’s a hassle to cook fortoday’s dinner today.

A bit more natural

It’s a hassle to cook for dinner today.

Add “a” before “hassle” and remove “for” for natural phrasing.

It’s would be hassle to cook for dinner today.

I remembered that I had a frozen Gyoza in the freezer.


I remembered that I had a frozen Gyoza in the freezer.

“a” makes it seems like you had only one piece of gyoza (一個), but you probably meant that you had a whole pack.

I remembered that I had a frozen Gyoza in the freezer.

No “a” before “frozen gyoza” when speaking generally.

I remembered that I had a frozen Gyoza in the freezer.

So I’ll have Gyoza for dinner tonight.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

S, so I’ll have Gyoza for dinner tonight.

It’s easy to cook it.


It’s easy to cook it.

It’s easy to cook it.

It’s easy to cook it.

It just put it on a pan.


It just put it on a pan.

ItYou can just put it on a pan.

ItYou just put it othem in a pan.

Change subject to “you” for instruction style Plural “them” for gyoza.

It just put it on a pan.

Today’s dinner is Gyoza, a tomato and cucumber salad, miso soup with egg,onion and seaweed(wakame).


Today’s dinner is Gyoza, a tomato and cucumber salad, and miso soup with egg,onion and seaweed(wakame).

Usually we put "and" before the last item. Since "miso soup with egg,onion and seaweed(wakame)" is considered as one item, we will put an "and" before it.

Today’s dinner is Gyoza, a tomato and cucumber salad, miso soup with egg, onion and seaweed (wakame).

Minor formatting

Today’s dinner is Gyoza, a tomato and cucumber salad, miso soup with egg, onion, and seaweed (wakame).

Add “and” before “miso soup” Fix spacing and punctuation

Today’s dinner is Gyoza, a tomato and cucumber salad, miso soup with egg, onion, and seaweed (wakame).

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