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ruby

Jan. 23, 2020

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Today's Article

Today, I read an article about relatives of a president or vice president.

A former President Joe Biden's son Hunter got a seat on the board of a Ukrainian gas company despite having no experience in the energy business. His salary was $50,000 a month.

Billy Carter ran a filling station. Shortly after his brother Jimmy was elected president, he became famous and even did personal appearances on TV. He received $220,000 from the Libyan government and drew media attention.

Lobbyists pay lots of money for access to a president or vice president.

Richard Nixon's brother Donald took a $200,000 loan from aviation billionaire Howard Hughes.
Neil Bush, a son of President George H.W. Bush, sat on the board of a savings and loan called Silverado. The company went bankrupt and taxpayers had to cost a billion dollars.

Thank you so much for reading!

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AHunter, the son of former Vice President Joe Biden's son Hunter, got a seat on the board of a Ukrainian gas company despite having no experience in the energy business.

This allows the sentence to flow more naturally.

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ruby

Jan. 24, 2020

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Thank you so much for correcting.😃

Today's Article

Today, I read an article about relatives of a president or vice president.

AHunter, the son of former [Vice] President Joe Biden's son Hunter, got a seat on the board of a Ukrainian gas company despite having no experience in the energy business.

His salary was $50,000 a month.

Billy Carter ran a filling station.

Shortly after his brother Jimmy was elected president, he became famous and even did personal appearances on TV.

He received $220,000 from the Libyan government and drew media attention.

Lobbyists pay lots of money for[to] access to a president or vice president's [information].

正しくないわけではないですが、この方が自然かと

Richard Nixon's brother Donald took a $200,000 loan from aviation billionaire Howard Hughes.

Neil Bush, a son of President George H.

W.

Bush, sat on the board of Silverado, a savings and loan called Silveradoompany.

OR: Bush, sat on savings and loan company Silverado's board of [directors/etc].

The company went bankrupt and taxpayers had to cost[pay] a billion dollars.

costはこのふうに使えません。「the company went bankrupt and [it] cost taxpayers a billion dollars」もいいと思います

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Akihiko

Jan. 24, 2020

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本当に上手になってきましたね!僕たちは同じ日にこのサイトに来たと思いますが、Rubyさんはもうこのレベルに着くとは... すごいです!!

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ruby

Jan. 24, 2020

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同じ日でしたか?偶然ですね😃いやいや、私の英語よりAkihikoさんの日本語の方が絶対に上手いですよ。これからも切磋琢磨して頑張りましょうね☺️😃

Today's Article

Today, I read an article about the relatives of a president ors and vice presidents.

A fFormer Vice President Joe Biden's son Hunter got a seat on the board of a Ukrainian gas company despite having no experience in the energy business.

His salary was $50,000 a month.

Billy Carter, the brother of President Jimmy Carter, ran a filling station.

Shortly after his brother Jimmy was elected president, heBilly became famous and even did personal appearances on TV.

Lobbyists pay lots of money for access to a president or vice president.

President Richard Nixon's brother Donald took a $200,000 loan from aviation billionaire Howard Hughes.

Neil Bush, a son of President George H.

Bush, sat on the board of Silverado, a savings and loan called Silveradoompany.

The company went bankrupt and cost taxpayers had to cost a billion dollars.

Thank you so much for reading!

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Very nice job.

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ruby

Jan. 24, 2020

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Thank you so much for correcting.☺️

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Today, I read an article about relatives of a president or vice president.


Today, I read an article about the relatives of a president ors and vice presidents.

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A former President Joe Biden's son Hunter got a seat on the board of a Ukrainian gas company despite having no experience in the energy business.


A fFormer Vice President Joe Biden's son Hunter got a seat on the board of a Ukrainian gas company despite having no experience in the energy business.

AHunter, the son of former [Vice] President Joe Biden's son Hunter, got a seat on the board of a Ukrainian gas company despite having no experience in the energy business.

AHunter, the son of former Vice President Joe Biden's son Hunter, got a seat on the board of a Ukrainian gas company despite having no experience in the energy business.

This allows the sentence to flow more naturally.

His salary was $50,000 a month.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Billy Carter ran a filling station.


Billy Carter, the brother of President Jimmy Carter, ran a filling station.

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Shortly after his brother Jimmy was elected president, he became famous and even did personal appearances on TV.


Shortly after his brother Jimmy was elected president, heBilly became famous and even did personal appearances on TV.

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He received $220,000 from the Libyan government and drew media attention.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Lobbyists pay lots of money for access to a president or vice president.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Lobbyists pay lots of money for[to] access to a president or vice president's [information].

正しくないわけではないですが、この方が自然かと

Richard Nixon's brother Donald took a $200,000 loan from aviation billionaire Howard Hughes.


President Richard Nixon's brother Donald took a $200,000 loan from aviation billionaire Howard Hughes.

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Neil Bush was the son of President George H.


W.


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Bush sat on the board of a savings and loan called Silverado.


The company went bankrupt and taxpayers had to cost a billion dollars.


The company went bankrupt and cost taxpayers had to cost a billion dollars.

The company went bankrupt and taxpayers had to cost[pay] a billion dollars.

costはこのふうに使えません。「the company went bankrupt and [it] cost taxpayers a billion dollars」もいいと思います

Thank you so much for reading!


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Neil Bush, a son of President George H.


Neil Bush, a son of President George H.

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Bush, sat on the board of a savings and loan called Silverado.


Bush, sat on the board of Silverado, a savings and loan called Silveradoompany.

Bush, sat on the board of Silverado, a savings and loan called Silveradoompany.

OR: Bush, sat on savings and loan company Silverado's board of [directors/etc].

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