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Jan. 11, 2020

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I read an article about a Silicon valley start-up company.

They are not a typical start up like companies with a bunch of guys in a garage codeing.
They are manufacturing biopolymers in a sewage treatment plant.

I think companies like this will increase in the near future since people around the world will try not to use plastic products.

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I read an article about a Silicon vValley start-up company.

They are not a typical start up like companies with a bunch of guys in a garage codeing.

They are manufacturing biopolymers in a sewage treatment plant.

I think companies like this will increase in the near future since people around the world will try not to use plastic products.

Thank you for reading!

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ruby

Jan. 13, 2020

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Thank you so much for correcting!

I read an article about a Silicon valley start-up/startup company.

They are not a typical start up like companies with a bunch of guys in a garage codeing.

この文章はほぼ完璧だったけど、指摘したいことがあります。「typical 」を使ったので、[bunch of guys in garage = typical startup company」という意味になります。でも、アメリカではstartupのイメージは結構いいと思います。僕がstartupを聞くと、小さいけどとてもきれいな、かっこいい会社を想像します。

They are manufacturing biopolymers in a sewage treatment plant.

I think [the number of] companies like this will increase in the near future since people around the world will try not to use plastic products.

Since you use "increase," don't forget to include "number." Usually, these two words go together.

Thank you for reading!

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Good work! I hope companies like the one you are talking about makes a breakthrough so there is less plastic waste... I worry a lot about the animals.

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ruby

Jan. 12, 2020

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Thank you for correcting! I worry the animals, too. People need to take a more proactive stance, including myself.

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I read an article about a Silicon valley start-up company.

They are not a typical start up like companies with a bunch of guys in a garage codeing.

They are manufacturing biopolymers in a sewage treatment plant.

I think companies like thisese will increase in the near future since people around the world will try not to use plastic products.

You are referring to plural "companies" so you have to use plural "these" here. If you want to refer to just the one company from the article you could use "this one".

Thank you for reading!

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Sounds like a very interesting article!

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ruby

Jan. 12, 2020

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Thank you for correcting!

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I read an article about a Silicon valley start-up company.


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I read an article about a Silicon valley start-up/startup company.

I read an article about a Silicon vValley start-up company.

They are not a typical start up like companies with a bunch of guys in a garage codeing.


They are not a typical start up like companies with a bunch of guys in a garage codeing.

They are not a typical start up like companies with a bunch of guys in a garage codeing.

この文章はほぼ完璧だったけど、指摘したいことがあります。「typical 」を使ったので、[bunch of guys in garage = typical startup company」という意味になります。でも、アメリカではstartupのイメージは結構いいと思います。僕がstartupを聞くと、小さいけどとてもきれいな、かっこいい会社を想像します。

They are not a typical start up like companies with a bunch of guys in a garage codeing.

They are manufacturing biopolymers in a sewage treatment plant.


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I think companies like this will increase in the near future since people around the world will try not to use plastic products.


I think companies like thisese will increase in the near future since people around the world will try not to use plastic products.

You are referring to plural "companies" so you have to use plural "these" here. If you want to refer to just the one company from the article you could use "this one".

I think [the number of] companies like this will increase in the near future since people around the world will try not to use plastic products.

Since you use "increase," don't forget to include "number." Usually, these two words go together.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Thank you for reading!


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