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Jan. 29, 2020

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I read an article about wildfires in California in 2019.
The California utility company is liable for the damages even if they are not negligent. They carried out scheduled blackouts twice last year.
An expert says that a committee including Public Safety officials, regulators, and politicians should be organized soon and it should make the shut-off decision, not the utility company.
There will be a growing number of natural disasters, which are beyond human control. I agree with this expert's opinion.

Thank you for reading!

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Today's Article

I read an article about wildfires in California in 2019.

The California uUtility cCompany is liable for the damages even if they awere not negligent.

They carried out scheduled blackouts twice last year.

An expert says that a committee including[comprised of] Public Safety officials, regulators, and politicians should be organiz[created] soon and [that] it should make the shut-off decision, not[rather than] the utility company.

There will be a growing number of natural disasters, which are beyond human control.

I agree with this expert's opinion.

Thank you for reading!

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いつもよくできています!。

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ruby

Jan. 30, 2020

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ありがとうございます:)

Today's Article

I read an article about wildfires in California in 2019.

The California uUtility cCompany is liable for the damages even if they awere not negligent.

They carried out scheduled blackouts twice last year.

An expert says that a committee including Public Safety officials, regulators, and politicians should be organized soon and that it should make the shut-off decision, not the utility company.

There will be a growing number of natural disasters, which are beyond human control.

I agree with this expert's opinion.

Thank you for reading!

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Amazing! Keep it up :)

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ruby

Jan. 30, 2020

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Thank you so much for your correction and comment!

Today's Article

I read an article about wildfires in California in 2019.

The California uUtility cCompany iswil be liable for the damages even if they awere not negligent.

proper nouns (The California Utility Company) are all capitalized, each word in the title

They carried out scheduled blackouts twice last year.

An expert says that a committee including Public Safety officials, regulators, and politicians should be organized soon and it should make the shut-off decision, not the utility company.

There will be a growing number of natural disasters, which are beyond human control.

I agree with this expert's opinion.

Thank you for reading!

Feedback

Very nice! :)

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ruby

Jan. 30, 2020

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Thank you very much for your correction!

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Today's Article

I read an article about wildfires in California in 2019.

The California utility company is liable for the damages even if they awere not negligent.

They carried out scheduled blackouts twice last year.

An expert says that a committee including Public Safety officials, regulators, and politicians should be organized soon, and it should make the shut-off decision, not the utility company.

When you use the word and to link two full sentences you should use a comma.

There will be a growing number of natural disasters, which are beyond human control.

I agree with this expert's opinion.

Thank you for reading!

ruby's avatar
ruby

Jan. 30, 2020

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Thank you so much for correcting!

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I read an article about wildfires in California in 2019.


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The California utility company is liable for the damages even if they are not negligent.


The California utility company is liable for the damages even if they awere not negligent.

The California uUtility cCompany iswil be liable for the damages even if they awere not negligent.

proper nouns (The California Utility Company) are all capitalized, each word in the title

The California uUtility cCompany is liable for the damages even if they awere not negligent.

The California uUtility cCompany is liable for the damages even if they awere not negligent.

They carried out scheduled blackouts twice last year.


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An expert says that a committee including Public Safety officials, regulators, and politicians should be organized soon and it should make the shut-off decision, not the utility company.


An expert says that a committee including Public Safety officials, regulators, and politicians should be organized soon, and it should make the shut-off decision, not the utility company.

When you use the word and to link two full sentences you should use a comma.

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An expert says that a committee including Public Safety officials, regulators, and politicians should be organized soon and that it should make the shut-off decision, not the utility company.

An expert says that a committee including[comprised of] Public Safety officials, regulators, and politicians should be organiz[created] soon and [that] it should make the shut-off decision, not[rather than] the utility company.

There will be a growing number of natural disasters, which are beyond human control.


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I agree with this expert's opinion.


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Thank you for reading!


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