Jan. 16, 2020
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I read an article about a startup company that manufactures plastic from methane.
They feed methane to their special-made bacteria. The bacteria transform it into a biopolymer that is then sold to plastic producers. When their bioplastic finishes with its uses, it will biodegrade back into methane. They call it a closed-loop cradle-to-cradle process, which is patented. Even if this biodegradable plastic ends up in the ocean, it will be digested naturally by marine organisms.
The company is called Mango Materials. The CEO says she wanted to sound different. I feel like everything related to this company sounds brilliant.
Today's Article
I read an article about a startup company that manufactures plastic from methane.
They feed methane to their special-madely bacteria.
The bacteria transform it into a biopolymer that is then sold to plastic producers.
They call it a closed-loop cradle-to-cradle process, which iand it's patented.
Even if this biodegradable plastic ends up in the ocean, it will be digested naturally by marine organisms.
The company is called Mango Materials.
The CEO says she wanted to sound different.
I feel like everything related to this company sounds brilliant.
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Mango Materials is a pretty interesting name. Mango is pretty sweet and delicious, so maybe when the material breaks down fish will love it too..
Jan. 17, 2020
I love the idea that fish will love it!! Thank you so much for the corrections!
Today's Article
I read an article about a startup company that manufactures plastic from methane.
They feed methane to their special-ly made bacteria.
The bacteria transform it into a biopolymer that is then sold to plastic producers.
When their bioplastic finishes with its uses, it will biodegrade back into methane.
They call it a closed-loop cradle-to-cradle process, whichand it is patented [or maybe even better, if it's true: and they hold the patent for it].
I don't think the first sentence is wrong, but there's a hint of ambiguity in the syntax - the modifying clause 'which is patented' seems to attach itself to 'they call it' rather than to 'process'
Even if this biodegradable plastic ends up in the ocean, it will be digested naturally by marine organisms.
The company is called Mango Materials.
The CEO says she wanted to sound different.
I feel like everything related to this company sounds brilliant.
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This is very clear and basically perfect - also really interesting!
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They call it a closed-loop cradle-to-cradle process, which is patented. They call it a closed-loop cradle-to-cradle process, I don't think the first sentence is wrong, but there's a hint of ambiguity in the syntax - the modifying clause 'which is patented' seems to attach itself to 'they call it' rather than to 'process' They call it a closed-loop cradle-to-cradle process, |
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