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Jonas

June 14, 2021

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Today's afternoon we had fun

After lunch, my son was willing to go out for fun pretty much. He said he would like to cycle around our neighborhood. Actually the bycycle he rode was a kind of balance bike like without foot peddles. My son always enjoy observing small things like ants or snalls etc. after raining. We fortunately got a cute snall on the wall. What's more was that we found groups of ants cleaning their house. The team spirit the ants have shocked us. All of them coodinated with shared accountability to carry on plenty of solid and samll rocks out of the holes. Out of curiosity, we looked up for a long time. After that we took the packges from the express hub.Then we went home for dinner and waited his Mom back.

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Today'his afternoon we had fun

After lunch, my son was willing to go out for fun pretty muchnted to go have fun outside.

Actually, the byicycle he rode was a a kind of balance bike like without foot peddles.

I'm not really sure what you mean here by "balance bike".

My son always enjoys observing small things like ants or snalils etc.

after a raining shower.

We fortunately got found a cute snalil on thea wall.

What's more was that we e also found a groups of ants cleaning their housme.

The team spirit work the ants have d shocked us.

All of them coordinated with shared accountability to carry on plenty of solid and samto carry a lot of small rocks out of the holes.

"Shared accountability" feels a little unnatural here. "Solid" also feels weird here because all rocks are solid.

Out of curiosity, we looked upwatched them for a long time.

After that we took the packages from the express hub. Then we went home for dinner and waited for his Mom backto come back for dinner.

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Jonas

June 15, 2021

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Thanks a lot. It really helps me.😁

Today's afternoon we had fun


Today'his afternoon we had fun

After lunch, my son was willing to go out for fun pretty much.


After lunch, my son was willing to go out for fun pretty muchnted to go have fun outside.

He said he would like to cycle around our neighborhood.


Actually the bycycle he rode was a kind of balance bike like without foot peddles.


Actually, the byicycle he rode was a a kind of balance bike like without foot peddles.

I'm not really sure what you mean here by "balance bike".

My son always enjoy observing small things like ants or snalls etc.


My son always enjoys observing small things like ants or snalils etc.

after raining.


after a raining shower.

We fortunately got a cute snall on the wall.


We fortunately got found a cute snalil on thea wall.

What's more was that we found groups of ants cleaning their house.


What's more was that we e also found a groups of ants cleaning their housme.

The team spirit the ants have shocked us.


The team spirit work the ants have d shocked us.

All of them coodinated with shared accountability to carry on plenty of solid and samll rocks out of the holes.


All of them coordinated with shared accountability to carry on plenty of solid and samto carry a lot of small rocks out of the holes.

"Shared accountability" feels a little unnatural here. "Solid" also feels weird here because all rocks are solid.

Out of curiosity, we looked up for a long time.


Out of curiosity, we looked upwatched them for a long time.

After that we took the packges from the express hub.Then we went home for dinner and waited his Mom back.


After that we took the packages from the express hub. Then we went home for dinner and waited for his Mom backto come back for dinner.

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